My Wife Became a General and Killed 400,000 Enemy Troops in the Beginning.

There are so many female protagonists who really ruin the whole pot. The female protagonists fall in love with the male protagonist like crazy after only a few meetings. There is no transition period. After a few meetings and a few words, they fall madly in love with the male protagonist. And when the protagonist has been completely engaged, he obviously has no way to marry two high-status women at the same time and prevent others from being engaged in marriage. He has the ability to find that Xu Longcheng (I think his name is), beat him up, and piss on his head. Isn't this just insulting! , Why was he originally looking for the father of the person he liked? Wasn't this engagement originally made by her father? Then the whole family gets rid of the scoundrels, and the protagonist can't be punished anyway, right? What was wrong with the man who was peed on? She is also destined by her parents, which means she is already his fiancée. Just because she has a lover (the protagonist), he was beaten and had his head peed on. This is already a great insult. Even if the emperor is close to the protagonist's father, the father who was peed on his head is also the founding father! It's so painless and not even punished. Aren't you afraid of separation? If the author doesn't know how to write a female protagonist, you can just write a single female protagonist. Why do you have to resort to wisdom when you encounter this? I thought it was pretty good-looking at first, but now I feel so embarrassed

It's too watery, too wordy, and the protagonist has no IQ and is just pretending to be cool.

It was a funny and refreshing article, but it collapsed later on. It's okay to take a casual look at the front. The heroine is not the protagonist. The protagonist is only Su Wen. The introduction is just an introduction.

This book, I think, has a good level of comedy. It has three major themes: traveling through the system, cultivation, and tactics. Just looking at the first half, although there are disadvantages, it is not bad, but the second half is worse than good. There are many things that were not dealt with in time until the end. For example, Su Changqing's real strength. Another big problem is that it is unfinished. He suddenly relies on time to stop and become the strongest, unify the world of humans and demons, and then there is nothing. However, if you write from now on, it will be about the arrival of strong men from other worlds, which is boring. In other words, since the introduction of the demon world, it has been something that can be seen at a glance. You can guess at least 7788, but overall it is still okay, but there is really no need to read it all. It is recommended that you stop reading when Gongsun Shi gathers all the heavens.

The combat power system I set up collapsed too quickly. The first two pictures talk about how awesome the heavens are, and they are all about the existence of peace and stability. There are Chinese cabbage in the back.

It's pretty good, but it's terrible.

After reading it for more than an hour, I didn't understand what the author wrote. The protagonist gave something given by the emperor to a skilled woman, but the skilled woman actually dared to accept it. Moreover, this is a fairy tale novel. After watching it for an hour, there was no fighting plot at all.