Three Kingdoms: I Was Exposed When I Intercepted Hu Diaochan at the Beginning

Really, I wanted to give you an average one, but what did you write from the middle to the end? The pacing in the early stage was very good, but you ended up speeding up. If you speed up, it speeds up and then slows down the pace in the middle and later stages. Originally, you speed up, thinking that you are in a hurry to write about cultivating immortals, but in the end, you just put the brakes on, one Jiangdong plus one Zhuge Liang and three legions, so that You write until the end, and the person you acquired in the mid-term is no better than Koto. As a result, you brake and the brake disc is completely worn out, and you just don't move forward. In the mid-to-early stage, you are painting a cake for everyone, thinking that you are still writing about cultivating immortals. But in the end, you just wrote half of the book by Koto and then ended it. Bye-bye to you.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 4. It's a lot of poison, but I understand everything.

I don't know how to explain it. The Yanyun Eighteen Cavalry rewarded at the beginning never appeared in the early stage. The overlord's power rewarded by the system plus skilled marksmanship and sword skills cannot defeat the 10 bandits in the bandit village.

It's full of water and ink, and its IQ is worrying. It's uncomfortable to watch, so bye bye!

What is this thing written about? What are you writing about, brother? Are these Three Kingdoms a harem novel? Then wouldn't it be over if you write about Ten Miles of Peach Blossom? I really can't stand it anymore. When I saw Ma Zhen, I was really speechless. One chapter of this stuff.

It's too watery.

I really like this kind of book. Can you write more? I like it so much. I like this kind of stallion.

The writing style is so poor that I have to talk about one thing for a long time.

I felt a bit bored after seeing Xiu Xian

It's time for dinner, brothers. This author is in a big trap.