The Great Song's Teacher

Complete the essay~ Starting from the teacher, the theme of saving the country during Song Dynasty throughout the text is novel, with a clear structure and a complete ending. Recommend it. What I wrote above is very interesting, but when I unbutton the landscape mark (traditional Chinese painting stone), the connection feels a bit disconnected. The water injected in the later stage is too high and far exceeds the narrative, so you can skip to watch (●°u°●)​"

Giving Yan'er away is poisonous

The author seriously lacks the ability to structure the story line from a third-party perspective, and there is too much self-righteousness reflected in the book.

I don't want to read it, Yan'er just writes it and it becomes someone else's.

Liu Shui Wen