The Emperor’s Veil

The big world structure is quite good, and the previous rhythm has been progressing in an orderly manner. However, the latter should be about 600 chapters, and the rhythm has obviously sped up too much. It feels a bit like Baidu Encyclopedia. There is no foreshadowing, just a result. It is a pity. I felt that the writing was rather sloppy at the end, and I basically put the outline of the ending of the story. If it can be slowly expanded to enrich the content, it feels very good, but it is a pity.

It looks good so far

The previous rhythm was well grasped, but the pace accelerated significantly after entering Zhongzhou. The fights kept escalating and then there was a lot of nonsense and typos. The final ending was also very sloppy and too fast. The fights continued to escalate, and then many holes were not filled in. The final description of the characters was not complete, such as Zhen Wuyu, Tang Yiersan, Li Ze, etc., And the forked dog, chicken, and cat were not clearly written in the end. To summarize, the first part is readable, but the middle is dull, and the second part is unfinished. If the author could write more than a thousand chapters and narrate the story completely, it would be considered a masterpiece.

I can only say it looks good

Very pretty

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