Pokemon: The Personality Master

I'm really speechless. The first fifty or so chapters of Pure Water were just pieced together and pulled here and there. It was boring to me. I just read it to kill time. It turned out to be a bunch of emotionless anecdotes. I forced myself to write some mentally retarded emotional dramas for the sake of expressing emotions.

The supporting characters are too retarded, the protagonist is forced to be funny, and has almost no training. It has the strength and plot of a cool novel, but it is not cool enough and has no slap in the face. There are not enough exciting parts at the end. . . Especially the national competition,,, the writing is messy. . . Abandoned

I feel like the characters are a bit sketchy and look a bit inexplicable.

The writing style is a bit immature at first and not very coherent, but it is also a good elf novel. At least I think it is similar to the top five elf novels I have read.