She Rules the Stars with Her Koi Luck

°˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°Wonderful! This is my dish (σ≧∀≦)σYouyou is particularly good, and Mo Chen protects his wife. There are friends and students from Class 16 who help each other very well and trust each other to work together as a team! But I didn't look at the exciting battlefield and vest later, which was not enough for team battles and dangerous adventures. It would be great to go on an adventure trip! Anyway, it is very beautiful, readers said so. Come and see it! (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) Believe me (= ･王< =)☆wink Dear author, give me a vote I'm leaving☆ (*ゝω*) ﾉ

Too many typos

I would give 5 out of 10 points, 5 points to the heroine's family, the heroine, and the hero. Her family loves her very much, the hero is a normal person who knows right from wrong and doesn't gossip, and the heroine is very capable and very comfortable to watch. The 5 points deducted are given to other people in the empire except for the people I mentioned. If you are not happy, you should blame the original owner. The original owner is really pitiful. Even though she was predicted to be the savior, she was not arrogant and domineering. She did not bully others but worked hard to practice. Of course, she did not handle the matter too eagerly when she went to find the seeds alone and died, but I think her starting point was okay, and even if she died, she did not implicate others. She worked hard to shoulder the responsibilities of the original owner without getting anything. The original owner was kind. These people did not pay anything and just expected to get something in return (gingko fruit). They put all their expectations on the original owner. When they didn't get it, they insulted and blamed others. That is why these people are stupid, bad, and vicious. Why should you forgive them like this? The original owners had received nothing and had nothing owed to them. Not to mention being supported by all the people, her parents and two brothers did enough for her to live happily as a princess. These people really make me angry, why should I forgive them?

The ending is too rushed and there are many typos, which affects the perception.

It ends too soon

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