Interstellar Scrap Queen

There is a lot of unnecessary nonsense. Are there any comments about chasing after six years without thinking? The author obviously has clear ideas, the plot can be compact step by step, and the story development line seems to be readable. Why is it necessary to write so many unnecessary dialogues and mindless internal monologues of novices? It feels like it is just to make up the numbers. This really outweighs the gains and losses. Many readers will lose and abandon the article. I really can't stand it anymore.

I have been following the novel for several years. It has been addictive since the heroine walked out of the garbage star to accept the freshman assessment. She often stayed up late to catch up on the novel. The heroine met a group of teammates in school who could do her best. From then on, the various tricks of the few friends were endless, hilarious and passionate. However, more than 1,000 chapters later, when the team formed a group to explore the rainbow interface in the interstellar rift, it was considered hydrological, and it was not completed after two or three years. Overall, it's very good-looking. I also watched "The End of the World" while I was following up on updates. If you like Ji You's style, you can give it a try, and Team V587 is no different. The key is that the story is very compact and the word count is not that big.

It's really good-looking. I've been following it since junior high school. I hope I can read more. It's so good-looking.

I'm speechless. There are more than 200 pictures and not even half of the main line has been opened. I admit that your settings are more beautiful, but this is the only point that supports me to watch so many. The whole plot is extremely stiff, written just to do this, completely illogical and inconsistent, and it feels like everyone has no reason to do everything. Also, I really want to ask if the author has any friends. I don't think those in the book are considered friends. They make fun of other people's flaws all day long, just because the heroine doesn't care? Zero politeness EQ. He makes sarcastic remarks without actually doing anything, and talks worthless all day long. Do we really need such a large group of useless people surrounding the protagonist?

😀 I didn't play well at first because it was so long-winded. I was so angry when I saw it later that I didn't look good when I shot it. Are you angry? He kept hanging up the phone. What kind of smart guy was that Cheng? He wanted help from the heroine and didn't wait for a call. Why, he thought he had notes when the master called him back? Don't say that he thought the master would reply and tell him his contact information first. He had no idea at all. He deserved the loss and deserved it.

Very nice! I've been following it for a long time, but the updates are too slow.

The setting is good, but it's too wordy, and the plot moves very slowly. I watch the heroine chatting every day. To be honest, half of the chapter is just her talking, with no actual content, which makes me feel a bit boring.

The heroine is so weak, can't the author give her a golden thumb...

Love your daughter is your lie... Does the protagonist have no name? He has to be called dad. What is a good word for dad? Can you use it in the whole text? Halfway through, I was confused and thought the protagonist was a man. Many words and descriptions were used to make people uncomfortable. If the protagonist is a woman, just use the female version. Author, your top priority is to switch to a male channel.

Don't you have to call someone by their code name? He obviously has a name, and a supporting character who uses dad as his catchphrase, is it true that no one hit him? It's really cheap, and the character is really speechless.