A Handsome Face in the World of One Piece

This is a systematic One Piece fanfic that was completed in 23 years. Most of the plot has no problems. The author also has his own unique insights into One Piece. The early stage is very smooth, but in the middle and later stages, it requires a little patience. It can be regarded as a very good One Piece theme. There are still a lot of controversies in this book. Since it describes the time before the plot of One Piece begins, the author created many original characters. For these characters, some readers who have insights into One Piece will have a better reading experience if they can accept it. Also, because One Piece is not over yet, there are also disputes about the settings of the final boss and other aspects. Of course, this is normal, because everyone has different understandings. Secondly, there are some shortcomings: First, there is a relatively forced plot in the middle period. I feel that either you have to patiently obtain forgiveness after exchanging identities, and readers will accept it to a greater extent, or you can be a hero to save the beauty during the war and get forgiveness. However, taking two together will reduce the protagonist's combat power, create a dangerous situation, and obtain forgiveness, which will make some people feel uncomfortable reading. The second is that some settings and details are confusing in the middle and later stages, which makes reading not so smooth in the middle and later stages, and you will wonder whether the previous settings are useful; third, the progress is obviously accelerated in the later stages, and the protagonist's strength increases by leaps and bounds, and it ends after a few big scenes; the last one is a common problem in some system-oriented novels: a system with a very high appearance rate in the early stage is no longer visible later. All in all, this novel is considered good among the many One Piece fanfics I have read before, and it is worth reading. Again, I believe it will bring a good reading experience to some readers.

After reading Chapter 29, first of all, the common shortcoming of devil fruits is the sea. Everyone knows this. As for the sea stone, it depends on the situation and varies from person to person. But! Can you even take a shower after eating a devil fruit? Don't tell me to take a bath directly with sea water in the bathroom? In addition, when exchanging souls with Peach Rabbit, the souls will automatically be exchanged back when the time is up. Is there an exchange of souls in the book? It really made me laugh

I can't read long-running novels, and I like novels with novel themes and better writing skills. This Pirates fanfic is very new, written from the perspective of the navy, and the author's writing style is good, and the protagonist's character is also okay. It is considered the best among the basic Pirates fanfics I have read. Although the title is a bit embarrassing and difficult to use, I think it is worth reading.

Exchange souls with Peach Rabbit, is this something an animal can do? No matter how smart an animal is, it can understand the soul? Can the exchanged soul be automatically exchanged back on time? Devil Fruits are afraid of sea water. Hailoushi's reaction varies from person to person. Does Tina use sea water to take a bath at home? The plug-ins are pretty normal, and there are diaries at the end of each chapter? Wouldn't it be better to write a side story in the middle or at the end?

Navy text, very good

I am speechless after reading Chapter 271. Would the Five Old Stars like a navy that is uncontrolled, tough and does not know how to protect the Tianlong people? They don't want to unify at all. If there are no pirates to check and balance, they may have to take action personally.

It ended too hastily, I still want to see more

What the hell is the diary at the end of each chapter? It looks like the author's life history, so I gave it up

I have been writing about a supporting character who has no role in the comic. This plot is a mess. The plot is also awkward and poisonous. There is no reason for it to be gone after more than 400 chapters🙄

The character design is very good, I like it very much