The Swallow Returns

I decided to abandon the article starting from "Chapter 335 Fragments"... The first 300 or so chapters are pretty good and very attractive to explore further. I hope Xu Jian and Lin Yunyan can work together to break the situation and live happily ever after in their second life. As a result, this chapter tells us that they are not only in the second life, but also have many other "fragmented" lives😰It's so confusing. Is this still an ordinary saying? Is this a fantasy cultivating immortality? I looked confused.

It's the kind that gets better and better the more you watch it, the woman is strong and the man is strong, and the husband and wife team work together to break the chess game. The author does a good job of foreshadowing and narrating the story in a eloquent way, so the plots at each subsequent stage are also wonderfully constructed without any sense of stiffness. The pure double arrows between the male and female protagonists point to each other, and they get sweeter as they go to the back. Hahaha, I am content to find sugar in the plot😌 It is one of the rare ancient Chinese novels in recent years that has both strong logic and excellent characters (personality).

I saw Chapter 450. This is the worst emperor I have ever seen. There are no secret guards or dead soldiers. Maybe poor🤔🤔? …

I saw that almost 300 chapters were very exciting, so I skipped to the end and found out that it is a serial, and the prince is still jumping up and down🤣🤣The author, please work hard to update, I caught up with the progress in two days😅😅The male and female protagonists are smart and have a good understanding of each other, but the plot is not too sweet. Is it because I have passed the emotion of love after resurrecting my life? Please send more candy to the author.

The first four-fifths are okay, but the remaining fifth is too long. It's a bit like the TV series "The Beginning". The male protagonist is trapped in time and looks for a way to break the death situation over and over again; the female protagonist is only reborn once. The two work together to uncover the secrets of the past life layer by layer, and the story is relatively strong. The shortcoming is that the writing is more wordy, and the male protagonist has a lot of psychological work, especially the "little princess". It is new once and then ordinary, and it becomes boring when it appears endlessly; the "hand stove" scene where the heroine Zhang Zhang stares at the male protagonist's hand stove is also very boring; As the biggest tool in the whole story, the Prince/His Royal Highness, it inspired his memory from when he was four years old, especially his ability to recall the face of an unfamiliar person. This ability is beyond ordinary people. Fortunately, this biggest tool man is a psychopath, and he is indeed not an ordinary person.

The more I watch, the more I can't stop. I still have to wait. It's so uncomfortable. I really want to know what the male and female protagonists will do next. This prince is really annoying. No, it's His Highness. I feel like he can't take on big responsibilities and can't get better. But who will be the successor in the plot? I'm very curious about the future direction.

Not exciting, too many convoluted plots

The content is very exciting. The relationship between the protagonists is like an old married couple supporting each other. The overall picture is also well written. There is no sudden wisdom. Whether the villain or the protagonist, the mountain is higher than the other, rather than a blind cat encountering a dead mouse. Recommended, good looking

There is no storyline in the whole book. You can write many chapters about a small matter. The writing is really good, but the rest of it is too lengthy.

The writing is very good and the story structure is clear. The plots are intertwined.