After I Transmigrate into a Book, I Take Down the Short-Tempered Second Male Lead

I don't understand the author's thinking. Why would he adopt a beggar child? Does it help advance the plot? Does it help to warm up the relationship between the male and female protagonists? I am extremely speechless and the writing is extremely confusing. How did you get the good reviews? I'm convinced. It really doesn't look good. I'm trying to persuade you to quit! ! ! !

The story is written in a delicate and tender way, very nice and vivid. I like it very much. I hope it will be updated soon!

The layout is quite large and the story is very vivid. It is worth a read.

It's a very nice book. The connection between characters is not superfluous, and the writing style is also very good. The arrangement of the main plot and branch plots, and the confrontation between countries, show the pattern. In addition, the characterization is also very rich, I give it 9.9 Points.

This book is one of the few that I read without skipping chapters. The plot is very exciting. The author has a great structure. There is no intrigue in the palace. It is about the rich country. The structure has risen to the national level. The first part is not very sweet, but the second part is really sweet (almost not sad). I hope there will be more emotional scenes. I think more people will read it. Finally, I cried for Ning Wu (it was really miserable). I hope the author can create better works❤️

I met a 5 or 6-year-old beggar boy on the roadside and took him home to be my son. I thought it was time to give up writing. The original owner is a 16- or 17-year-old girl. When such a big kid calls her mother, shouldn't she get goosebumps all over her body?

Hehe, I personally think it looks very good. Although the front part is not the snoring and snoring kind, the back part (dog food) is enough for me to eat for half a year. [Cover your mouth and laugh]

The article makes people feel visually tired

The beginning is very attractive. I put down the book I was reading and read this book first. After reading more than 100 chapters, I read the comments again. The comments said that Ning, Kang, and Jin Sheng were all gone, and several of my favorite supporting characters were dead. I felt a little sad, so I skipped to the end. There was a bit of ink, and I had no patience to read on. The female protagonist, the male protagonist, there were too many things to do. In fact, this book is well written. If you have the patience to read it, it should be a good book!

It's really good-looking, and it's worth it. Highly recommended! The story of a little cannon fodder and a great general who changed their fate against fate. The combination of the character's destiny and the main line of love and the development of the story are reasonable and natural and not obtrusive, and the characters' language is smooth, natural and close to reality. Personal feeling score can be around 9.3 Points. Several minor supporting characters died in the end, which I found really unbearable. If these minor supporting characters had not died in the end, I would have given a higher score.