The Empire's Appetite

After reading it, overall it is very good. What is regrettable is probably the deaths of Wang Jian, Wang Ben and others, and the fact that the protagonist did not tell them that his daughter (granddaughter) was still there before he died. I would feel better if I told them, and the deaths of the Jiang family girl and Fusu... In this book, the early development of the main body is relatively slow, but I personally think it is better to tell stories to the villagers after dinner in a small village and develop slowly. In the mid-term, the protagonist will obtain a descendant of the Xian family and a higher status in the court, and reform the Qin Dynasty. In the later period, the main purpose was to expand the territory and to prevent Hu Hai and others from usurping the throne. After reading it, what I want to say is... It still feels a bit short. After all, Egypt and the Mauryan Dynasty have not yet been conquered. I feel that the author can continue to write a thousand or two thousand pictures, even if he writes about daily life, food, and the joy of the court (I like it, don't criticize it if you don't like it) Sure enough, the deaths of Wang Jian and Wang Ben made people uncomfortable. In the end, they didn't know that their daughter (granddaughter) was still alive. The death of the girl from the Jiang family and Fusu also made people feel uncomfortable, especially the girl from the Jiang family. It would be great if she was alive... I personally think it's okay with the handling of Yu Ji later. , After all, she and Xiang Yu were at odds with each other in the last life. In this life, the protagonist has opened up a new life for them (if Yu Ji marries the protagonist, I personally think it will be fine). There will be no mention of the protagonist's sister later. After all, she married Liu Dashi (probably called this name) from the same village... The protagonist here is not like other novels about the development of science and technology and chemistry. He invented it just a few months before he opened his mouth. Some projects even stopped for 56 years and were only invented in 1978. They are not too far away from reality... In the end, I still like this book very much. If you see this comment, you can try to continue reading it patiently (if you really don't like it, please don't complain, after all, it is only because I like it very much). In addition, if there is a similar type of novel that changes ancient times, it is best to be more casual and entertaining, not too divorced from reality, please...

Will there be another appearance after B wins over A? What about red pine nuts? Became an immortal??

The front is ok. It is obvious later that the author was under great pressure and found it difficult to write. There was too much water in the article. Not to mention anything else, let's just say that the author wrote about the protagonist and Jiang Chuyue from the first time they met at the beginning until they met again in Peixian County. The protagonist has four wives and two children, and he is still a modern person, but he is still confused here with Jiang Chuyue. Author, are you in there and can't get out? It's too late to complain.

Where did this 9 points come from? The plot is pretty good. The main character has to be beaten if there is a girl. Also, it's very wordy. Did you just search it from Du Niang and put it up directly? I have read more than 200 chapters and the more I read, the more I feel like Shark Arm. I can skip reading without delay. I can't bear to log in to express my opinion. 9 Points is still so poisonous and very watery.

I really can't stand it after reading over 200 chapters. Water aside, the protagonist is still timid and afraid of getting into trouble. The enemy is spared once.

The more I wrote, the more abstract it became. I originally thought that if I kept at it after watching it for so long, maybe the plot would get better later on, but the more I wrote, the more abstract it became💩

It's still okay, it's quite interesting. Not bad!

The character's personality is very general, and the character's personality is streamlined. No matter how well it is written, this is what this book will be like.

It's poisonous, run away. You must live with modern ideas, and no one will tell you your fate! In over twenty chapters, is it a waste of time to write one chapter about my sister's future marriage? Isn't the introduction to the article about Qin Shihuang's globe? Why are you still thinking about Liu Bang and Xiang Yu? And Xiang Yu split the country? I still take it for granted that I have to make good friends with Zhang Liang and others, haha. What else is said about Xiang Yu being single-minded and taking his woman to death with him...

If the author doesn't know history, don't write it. What he writes is messy.