Isn't It True That Some People Think It's Difficult to Become an Immortal?

It looks good but the author is a bit short

I watched it for the second time. I stayed up late to watch it. I first watched Lu Changsheng a few years ago. I accidentally watched this a few days ago and found out that it was my second watch. It was great, but the ending was too fast. Good job, author✍️. The humor is humorous and not vulgar. The writing is good. Keep up the good work.

This book is not good to read. I can still read it at the beginning, but it becomes more and more confusing as I go to the end. Not only does the wording contradict myself, but some of the plots in it are also conflicting. I can't stand it until halfway through. I don't recommend it.

Good review terminator!

No, how were you able to write the protagonist as a supporting character? The more I watch later, the less I want to watch Invincible

The book is very good, there are many places where I can't help but laugh. Unfortunately, the ending feels rushed. Come on, author.

The first and middle stages were okay, but the comedy style got worse as it went on, with more and more bugs. You obviously don't know how to write foreshadowing, so don't forcefully write that kind of plot. Just continue to be funny until the end. It can be said that the senior brother has foreshadowing, and it is easy to understand the bad luck. Except for the senior sister's clear statement at the beginning, the others are forced into it. The master is a Mahayana, and the talent of the junior brother cannot be said to be as simple as going against the heavens. You Mahayana said that you want to be worthy of the junior brother, but you really don't show it at all? Any pointers? Several other juniors can't understand it, but you can't understand it in the Mahayana period. He came from nothing? He doesn't know what level the senior disciple who teaches the junior disciple is at? So we must forcefully arrange a name for the master? I didn't feel sad at all when my master died, I just felt it was abstract. It felt abstract from the moment he revealed his Mahayana cultivation.

The pace in the front is too slow, the pace in the back is too fast, what is the ending? Overall, it is good-looking, the writing is good, and it is refreshing.

It looks pretty from the front, but the more you look at the back, the more embarrassing it becomes.

It's well written. If you polish the details, it will definitely be a masterpiece. It's a pity that there is so much fun and entertainment that I don't have much time to do one thing.