Senior Brother Mediocre

"Brother Ordinary" is a humorous and nonsensical fantasy novel. ‌The protagonist of the novel, Lu Changsheng, travels to the world of immortals. Although his qualifications are mediocre, he possesses peerless beauty and extraordinary temperament. His movements can cause strange phenomena in the world. He easily wins the title of Literary Saint and Formation Immortal, and successfully becomes a Sword Immortal. This setting makes the novel full of humor and nonsensical elements, and also allows readers to feel the wonder of the world of cultivating immortals in a relaxed and enjoyable reading. ‌The humorous style and novel routines of the novel‌ are one of its highlights. The author breaks the serious atmosphere of traditional immortality novels and shows various wonders of the world of immortality in a humorous way. For example, Lu Changsheng's recitation of poems can shock literati, and his casual utterance of a few classic lines can attract auspiciousness. This setting makes the novel full of freshness and interest. In addition, the plot setting of the novel is also very exciting, and the direction of the story's development is often unexpected. ‌The shortcoming of the novel‌ is that the later plot has some aesthetic fatigue, and the extensive description of the protagonist's power and visions will make people feel monotonous. The ending of the novel is not satisfactory enough, and the sudden ending makes people feel unsatisfied.

Today I discovered that all the high-quality novels that Qimao didn't have before are online. Mao Ni, the third young master of the Tang family, Paper Flower Boat, Chen Dong... I'll put it away when I see it. I can't finish watching it!

It's really good-looking, and the male protagonist is so miserable that he is eventually misunderstood to be an extremely strong man. In short, this is a funny and refreshing article. Friends who like it can read it.

Saw 483, 9.4 Points. All members made rumors+spread rumors+imagined monsters+dihua. The story is quite exciting, but there is no heroine, not many friends or enemies around me, and the character descriptions are average. I quite like the blind man from the Protoss. The author's writing style is not good, and the description of various phenomena, the destructiveness of fighting, the shock of breakthroughs, the advancement of magical weapons, etc. Are all superb. These scenes account for more than 50% of the page. The author's writing style is good. Elementary school students can pick out a lot of typos. It is particularly confusing when listening to the book. The idioms and words must be reversed in order to make it appear new and different. The description of the realm, magic weapon, vision, law, avenue, etc. In the article is relatively vague. The protagonist told the client two stories (white fox, prince & general), but how did he know the truth of the story?

The author puts the protagonist on too high a pedestal, and there will be consequences if his moral character is not up to par. No matter how amazing and handsome the description is, I still think it is ugly.

Senior Brother Pingwuqi, in this book Lu Changsheng is a person who traveled to the world of cultivation due to a car accident. His master, Taoist Qingyun, was the best person to him in the lower world when Lu Changsheng just came through. However, although Lu Changsheng ascended to the upper realm and was beheaded by the demon realm first, the first thing Lu Changsheng thought of after stabilizing the demon realm was his master. On the way to find his master, he also met the elder Lu Changsheng from the lower realm who also extended a helping hand, either with immortal energy or elixir. I haven't finished watching it yet hahh. I will continue writing after I finish it. Anyway, look below! ! ! Protagonist: Lu Changsheng Master: Taoist Qingyun Identity: Lower Realm, the first person in Daluo Immortal Sect Upper Realm, heir to the demon clan (I don't know if the third party I saw will change his identity later) Already have special effects: (that I know of) three immortal gods, Pangu Totem, the energy of three thousand avenues, and the purple spiritual sea! The Great Dao Qinglian, the seven hundred and twenty-foot Yuan Shen... (I won't go into details about them) (I've written so much, please give me a thumbs up, please🥴🥴🥴)

Nice!

The beginning is really good, but the further you go, the more it falls apart. The finale is even more confusing and ends too hastily. The first few people I wrote about were looking for those people, but in the end, there was no ending at all. The protagonist solved the biggest villain in one sentence.

It felt fresh when I first watched it, but its shortcomings were exposed in the later stages. The writing is stiff, the expressions are complicated, some characters are intellectually subdued, and the setting is confusing (the worldview and combat power system are especially messy). Generally speaking, it is acceptable, but it cannot be called a masterpiece.

I think it's very good. The storyline is very exciting and it is a good book.