Great Writer

The palace fight part in the middle is okay, and the language is quite fluent. I would like to give it a good review to encourage it. Disadvantages: 1. The character description is weak, 2. The plot device is simple, for example, the emperor is fighting outside, and then someone in the capital surrenders or causes rebellion, and then a Jaguar comes and slaps him in the face, it is just funny, and it is used five or six times.

A novel about hunting tigers... Haha. That's it!

I can see the ending of the novel. The first half is exciting, a little bit anticlimactic. Fortunately, it is finished. Although it is a bit rushed and some of the logic is fragile and cannot be further elaborated, it does not affect it. It is a good book. It is okay, 70-80%.

What kind of nonsense did you write in the later period?

It was okay a hundred chapters ago, but since the bet with Wang Daru, it has become a children's story. The further it goes on, the more childish it becomes.

Is the male protagonist wearing clothes or wearing souls? The logic is flawed

Say something ugly, kid text

Why did he suddenly practice immortality and qi in Chapter 97? So sudden? A good battle of wits has turned into practicing Qi and cultivating immortality. Has the person changed?