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To objectively evaluate it, it is a very pure piece of writing. I even confirmed over and over again whether it was written by a master, just to create a natural effect, but unfortunately 99% of the time it was not. (If he is a real master, count him nb) It is a bit similar to the novel I wrote before. The deliberately created ancient style effect is not revealed, but instead creates drama and peacekeeping. I read through a bunch of comments and criticized the plot for being repetitive. The plot is a bit draggy, but compared to other cool novels, the plot is outstanding, so I won't spoil it here. Occasionally, the article may be a little watery, but it is still fair and normal, and that is normal. However (I'm going to start boasting), as a harem pleasure novel, it is adequate, and the combat power is basically not broken. The description of the battle scenes is not very graphic, but because the scenes are too strong in the author's mind to be described in detail, and the rapid battle plot does not allow him to use long words to exaggerate. These are also the reasons why I say it is a novice novel. However, you don't need to be too specific about the protagonist's chaotic state of mind. Just read it quickly and skip it. Maybe it will have a different feeling from many novels that are the same?

Comment objectively The logic of the whole story is acceptable, and the interest is above the standard. Watchable, but not a good work. The overall structure of the book is problematic: it's too lengthy early on and too short toward the end. I personally speculate that the author may not have written the outline well. As for the important supporting role Li Mubai, the narrative in the early stage was quite precise. But in the later stage, it can almost be said that this person was not found. There were only a few strokes and small plot connections, which were not worthy of the long story in the early stage. Additionally, this book has a huge problem with deus ex machina. Many concepts can almost be said to have emerged out of nowhere, the most prominent one being the so-called Mahayana monk Sun Xuerou from the Paradise Valley. As a monk in the Mahayana period of the human race, Nangong Lie would not be so miserable when he learned about Sun Xuerou's existence. As well as the subsequent identity of the original owner of the protagonist's body, although there is a slight hint in the previous article, the logic in the previous description is confusing, and it is difficult for readers to clearly understand its deep meaning. Therefore, the foreshadowing here is not exciting. In addition, there are some contradictory or illogical situations in some details: for example, after the "fall" of Zhao Sihai and Ma Wenyuan, Nangong Lie once said that he sensed that there were two vacancies in the Mahayana stage in the human race. But the Sword Sect has a way to keep the quota for the Mahayana period in its own sect. Why don't the Academy and the Northern Snow Mountain have the same? Finally, the ending of this article is too short and sloppy. It not only lost the thrill of climbing to a high place step by step, but also failed to satisfy the protagonist's long-cherished wish to return to earth. It would be an understatement to say it was a mess. Ps: Regarding the emotional line of this book, except for Ding Yao and Gongye Mingyue, it is not recommended to read deeply.

My friend, your article is like your life and personality. Reading your article, I find that you are not only clumsy but also very opaque, and it also exposes a lot of the dark side of your heart.

Objectively speaking, compared with "Fight to Break the Sphere" and "Martial World", the male protagonist is a bit defiant and morbid, but realistically speaking, the portrayal of the world view, the construction of the plot, and the step-by-step chess moves are really fascinating. The author's pattern is also very shocking, reversing and reversing, thinking about the world, and figuring out the human heart. Who would have thought that the author only turned 17 in 2022? I admire it very much.

The protagonist is too psychologically bt, and my personal evaluation is that it is a disgusting qjf. It's okay to drive, but your behavior is really bad

It's a cool article, okay. The main idea is good, but it's too boring and has too much gossip.

A score of 6 is an overestimation of IQ.

Demonic Cultivator, you are cruel and ruthless. You, the protagonist, talk so much. What did you write when you fell to the ground?

There are too many meaningless descriptions and too much nonsense.

A lot of verbosity, a lot of nonsense, bad review