Gou Marries a Wife in the World of Immortality

The author's writing is very good, he is a veteran

Overall it's okay, but there are a lot of plot logic flaws.

It is a better one among the novels about cultivating immortals who started out as self-employed and farm laborers. The writing is fluent, especially the fairy town is not described as a village in the city, and there are no descriptions of dirty living habits (such as opening the door and throwing dirty water or bitching...). Although the theme of an old scumbag collecting an older leftover woman to build a harem is common, there are not many that are logical (carefully make up a reason).

I was reborn. In my last life, I was framed by a traitor. In this life, I want to take back everything that belongs to me. In addition to the speed of the car, it is full of web drama atmosphere. After reading over 260 chapters, I canceled it.

At present, it seems to be a story about dual cultivation and upgrading. It is estimated that the more Taoists, the better.

I hope the author will use his shrewdness on the right path and not always imagine those unbearable pornographic scenes. There is nothing interesting about this book except for the foul language of those old drivers. There is nothing wrong with the protagonist struggling to survive until he has no strength, but don't keep doing it all the time. If you do it for too long, the reader's patience will be gone.

The biggest logical error is that it will take so many years from the second stage of Qi refining to practice with "immortal energy" to the foundation building stage. It is really speechless. . . Then comes the Qi refining period, from spiritual sand to mid-grade spiritual stone. Then what spiritual stone will you use when you reach the foundation-building elixir, Yuan Ying, and become a god? . . In the foundation building stage, you can "read the minds" of what other people are practicing. If you search all over the world for cultivators in the Qi refining stage, you can get endless resources/adventures/opportunities. The logic can be divorced from reality, but it must conform to the logic in your book.

The more I look at it, the more tacky it becomes 😒