Keeping a Low Profile in the Immortal Martial World: Taking a Wife and Living Forever

I have read Chapter 82, let me tell you my feelings. How can I put it this way? Although this book has a system, I feel that the system is very rubbish, so the protagonist has always been a rubbish. Although he declares that he is a Taoist, it gives people the feeling of being cautious and living on thin ice. There is a risk of being picked up at any time. So in fact, this book is a bit depressing and not a refreshing article. In addition, the author asked for votes for every chapter, and I clicked on it to broadcast it. If every chapter asked for votes, I would have just clicked and reported it to be removed from the shelves. It's so annoying. Fellow Taoists, in the world, see you again!

This novel is all perfunctory. It's not like a novel, it's like an instruction manual. You try your best to marry and take concubines. The concubines don't even have names. How many concubines are married, how many skills are given, how many reward items are given, just like this.

There's too much nonsense, it's better to be simpler. What about writing in classical Chinese? Keep it simple, you don't need to explain too much, it makes it look very weak

The writing style is quite good, but it is too wordy, extremely wordy, with too many redundant statements and annotations.

Goldfinger is not powerful but it is well written. The plot is exciting and the logic is self-consistent in the world set by the author. It is a good online article and deserves five-star reviews. I don't know what will happen next. I hope the author will work hard.

It's okay, but there's no ending. It's over in a daze.

Easy and comfortable to read

I think this book is pretty good, a little rough but the main character is always awesome. Always on the side with the advantage

This is a normal protagonist

The plot is unique and very eye-catching. The ending makes you want to keep reading. It's very interesting.