Battle Frenzy

The federal power is too high, the presence of the competition is too low, the parliament is poisonous, the top ten federal powers, and the top ten potential competitors of the Assassin family disappeared overnight. The competitive Assassin family! ? Not even a little defensive? Empire undercover? The Federation is so strong, yet so bad? A federation-wide competition, no reaction at all? Wang Zhong's background is too mysterious, like the Federation, with a high technological coefficient, but too chaotic and mysterious. Now that I see it, I think it's a good book, but it's a pity that it didn't go well in the later stages.

I have read other books by this author, and this one is considered relatively bad. The novel with the League of Legends as the background may have been extended in order to be understood by people who do not play games, and the combination of Chinese and Western is neither fish nor fowl. I wrote almost half the book on a CHF competition, five or six chapters on a battle, and three or four chapters on an alchemy. Before each battle, there are countless trash talks from the opponent, and the audience's disapproval is so disdainful that they are slapped in the face. Even if the protagonist is undefeated, the same idiotic routine is repeated endlessly. Isn't the author tired of it? For me it's about turning pages faster. When I went to the Holy City before, I said that the Holy Land occupies a lot of space besides the earth. Later, when I went to the underworld, only the civilization of the earth was left. The heroine's mentor in the Holy Land was originally said to be eight-star, but in the next chapter it became nine-star, and after a few chapters it became seven-star. It was too random. The upgrading of civilization is very haphazard, and the cultivation system is chaotic. I wanted to write a group portrait but ended up missing a lot of people. And the unsolvable curse from the old Blood Demon team is so easy to use, why didn't it be used on the people on earth earlier, and why did it have to wait until Simba woke up before using it? Why isn't Simba worried about the hero dying when he's sleeping? There are too many pitfalls so I won't go into details.

This book is suitable for readers under the age of 18

The endings of the last few chapters were a bit abrupt, but the writing was quite smooth. I don't know why I stopped writing them all of a sudden, but the plot was barely satisfactory, but it was weird. The levels of this book are divided into foundation building (forged soul, heroic soul, heavenly soul, virtual elixir, real elixir), golden elixir, and the rest is gone. It can be seen that the author has great ambitions. In fact, he wants to write a long book, and the world view is quite large. The depth of the last map should be larger. After all, the foundation is the highest on the earth, and the golden elixir is completed at the end of a long time. There should be many more systems of this kind of immortality cultivation below. Moreover, this ending made the early and mid-term games too lengthy, with more than one million words written, without any detailed summary. From the beginning of the qualifying round to the finals, if I remember correctly, there was not a single summary. In addition to writing about the protagonist team, other teams also wrote a lot. I understand that I wanted to introduce the characters, but it was too long. I started skipping around around the quarter-finals and continued until the end of the game. Although there are no repetitions, there are too many similar plots, and the support of the audience is embarrassing. Except for this part, everything is good. The description of the battle scenes is very good, and there are basically no big mistakes in logic. What I like most is that this book does not have too much sensationalism about family and country. The writing is okay, but once it is not handled well, it will be embarrassing. Overall, highly recommended!

Why the hell does one game cost a thousand chapters!

Too much nonsense, write a game, grind it off, he writes out the process for you in every game, there are only a few chapters about the protagonist, it's really uncomfortable to watch

To be honest, the plots before the CHF competition were pretty good. My personal favorite was the plot where Wang Zhong and Caroline first met. The straight-forward youthful spirit. Later on, I insisted on looking back because I wanted to see the two meet. In the end, the author just used a few words to pass on this relationship. I feel that there was no foreshadowing in the shaping of Caroline. She was innocent and ignorant at the beginning, and then became profit-oriented without any transfer. It was really uncomfortable.

It felt like I was writing about a king, a five v five game, two people fighting against each other, I wrote a lot, and it felt like everyone else was as motionless as a piece of wood, and the fifth dimension didn't say anything. It was inexplicable, and they didn't give any news about our invasion.

I don't even know what it's about, and I can't see a main line.

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