Star Wars Storm

Theme: Star Wars, Mecha (very good) Character design: Protagonist (unknown person), heroine (??? I think there are three at the moment, but I don't know which one). The halo of the protagonist does not seem to be that heavy, but it may be due to the confusion of the plot. Plot: The early stage is normal (alone + the old man survives stacking buffs), and the old man's foreword is good. A genius in physics and mathematics, although his genetic test was very poor, he managed to overtake him and enter the Earth Military Academy (first of all, the Earth chapter was very rough) Easter egg link: You meet and date a feminist princess of a certain country by chance, and secretly date her. Then the princess expresses her feelings, and the protagonist is almost killed. Then the protagonist's strength improves (softly and hardly). The mid-term opening revolves around this. The middle period is dull and confusing: first of all, writing and typos aside (which affects the perception), the plot starts from CT (normal food abuse stage), then enters school training and then participates in the IG Solar System competition (the plot still has some ups and downs), during which time it also experienced small-scale battles and special Rubik's Cube training (Golden Finger is analogous to the world of rings). Then I entered the X-Ability Elite Academy (the sense is that the steps are very big, divided into several departments: captains, mobile suits, auxiliary X-abilities, etc. I don't know much about it, so I can only talk about it based on what I saw. Maybe it's because I read it quickly, and there is also an X-Ability Elite Academy named after the four mythical beasts). So far, I have read almost 700 chapters, about 60%. The overall feeling is that the plot is similar to one of the books I have seen before, but the writing and plot connection are not that good.

To be honest, this subject has a large audience, and boys are basically the potential audience. I had read the author's book before, which was a new book he mentioned in his introduction. I only found out it was the same author when I saw the introduction of this book. The first book I read was actually okay. Apart from some typos and a confusing plot, I could barely read it. After reading this book again, to be honest, the author obviously followed a routine to the end. The toad eats swan meat, and then the mysterious man stacks buffs and the game abuses food. To be honest, the difference between these two books is not much difference except for the change of names, plot direction, and background settings. It gives the impression that if you go to a restaurant, order a dish, finish it, and then go back the next day, what he gives you is the same dish you had yesterday. He doesn't even change the ingredients, just processes it and serves it to you, and he even says it's a new dish. . I won't talk about those typos. To be honest, I think this is a very low-level and mentally retarded mistake for someone who makes a living by coding, and it is completely avoidable.

It's too bad. Qimao can put such a book with so many wrong words and typos on the shelf. It's like treating itself as a trash can. I think this book should not be called a book, but a draft! Basically every three pages there is a typo or word! This does not include those grammatical sentences. What level of author can write an article with such language skills? Really dirty eyes

I just kept writing about the game, the logic was pretty tight, but something was wrong starting from the temple's search for the Holy Son. I thought the story line would at least progress from the virtual world developed by the temple, but it turned out that Zhang Shan got the inheritance at the apostle level and directly closed the server. The previously mentioned settings that needed to be redeemed were immediately taken away. I was also drunk in Gui Yi Jue, the Blade Jue. At first, I said that the skills given by Skeleton did not belong to this world and would be erased by the will of the world or something like that. Later, it became like Heitan gave the first half and Skeleton gave the second half. The mecha awarded by X Elite Academy was used once and never appeared again. Either you don't write down the other twelve things, or you don't fill in the gaps if you write them down. The most annoying part is the last part. Is that a war? It's like playing. I thought that Constantine and other elders launched a war on the grounds of corruption of other countries' high-level officials for the sake of immortality. The second elder reached an agreement with Abitan in order to fish in troubled waters. In the end, no one targeted Wang Zheng at all. When other countries went to war, there should have been elders to assassinate Wang Zheng. Otherwise, how could he live forever? In the end, three or two kittens came just for the ore, and Atlantis didn't understand why it ended. Introducing Wang Zheng's possible identity in the parallel universe without writing about the parallel universe. It's better not to introduce it at all. It's a big air, there are wars between countries, there is the church, there are parallel universes and the Zerg, and the result is a mess. The Zerg was written so well before that Lear punched it to pieces. I was really speechless. I always thought that the Zerg was A super BOSS, for example, while invading other universes, first fish for the human side, because when it was obvious that Wang Zheng was trapped in the deep layer, the veteran said that he could only get out if the transport worms threw things from their universe, otherwise he would probably escape to other universes. Writing about the final war would be better than writing about the war with the Zerg. What I want to complain about the most is that Lin Feng was sent to be a suicide squad. I don't think any country would be so NC. Those who can reach the heaven level in a short time will be given away for free. Also, Hercules is always showing off. I don't understand why agricultural mechas should be compared with military ones. What is the difference between this and a tractor hitting a tank? If you want to play shovel, other mechas can't use it or so on. There was no positive feedback from the business side from beginning to end.

I haven't written two articles yet. I just have to do this and that. Every day I'm either busy or having a baby. I'm either celebrating a festival or having my period. I'm just trying to make up the word count.

It's exciting from the beginning to the end. There are a lot of fighting scenes, but five or six scenes before the finale are a bit unfinished. Overall, it's okay. Oh, the most important thing is that this is a book 11 years ago, the author wrote it in 2014, and it still has such high ratings in 2025. There's no need to say anything, just watch it

After reading it, in conclusion, it's awesome

Skeleton, as a long-time fan since Mobile Storm, you can't change your style, instead of a military academy, it's just a training camp. I feel like vomiting just looking at it.

This is a novel from 2013. How many years later, the protagonist's ability to waste time is quite powerful. Anyway, after being shot down by his own people, what did he do in terms of combat power and technology in the solar system? Is he hurriedly pulling the protagonist back and not allowing the protagonist to have a good rest after the war and resolve the agreement? Or is it a group of scientists that the juniors who value it actually don't care at all? It is not as useful as the emotional line. Moreover, when participating in a strength battle, the science and technology association is looked down upon, and finding a strong person to fight is more useful than these.

It is outrageous that a book with the title Star Wars is still writing about the game at %70.