Doomsday Loop

First review of the gun!!!!! Congratulations to Mu Da for opening a new book! Switch to female videos!!! Come on!!!! It is slightly different from Muda's previous style. In addition to the protagonist changing from a happy silly boy to a beautiful and wise big sister, the plot is more compact and gripping than before because of the weird and interesting game mode. The content is very deep, the warmth and warmth of human relationships in the apocalypse, and the darkness and glory of human nature echo each other!!! It's great to watch!!! Mu Da's writing has also improved a lot this time, and the description of the scene and the atmosphere are very good! I wish Mu Da's new book a bestseller!!!

The plot of the novel is good, and the most typical one is to use the loopholes in the rules of the bizarre game as an entry point to highlight the decisiveness and wisdom of the heroine. But at the same time, some shortcomings of the novel interfered to such an extent that they affected my desire to continue reading. 1. The description of character moods is too simple and too frequent. The protagonist's camp is righteous and evil (I personally find it uncomfortable to be involved in it), and the opposing camp is evil and has no characteristics. In the early stage, the frequency of appearances, such as the greedy and crazy cannon fodder, was too high. The antagonist character I had in mind was the feeling that "the moral boundaries and persistent "new world" that the madman adheres to are nothing but self-absorption and ethical sinking in the eyes of others." Even if there is an eye-catching character like this in the early stage, I haven't encountered it at least after reading more than 20 chapters. 2. Some of the game plots are very blunt (maybe due to the writing style) and do not reflect the crazy feeling of the game between the two sides at all (for example, Kai Xing, part of the reason is that I wanted a sense of game atmosphere, but it did not meet my expectations.) 3. There is always a feeling that the heroine is very weak. (I personally think that the perspective given to me by the heroine is too correct. People are complex contradictions, and the inner perspective can really cut through all channels of selfish thinking) "Laijia's statement (this review is only for Chapter 23 and before): The above are all my personal opinions, mixed with objective and subjective colors. Please read this review with caution.

What a Holy Mother. Everyone you meet should help each other, regardless of character or worry about the situation. In short, it is very Holy Mother. Then the supporting characters will make some mistakes. In the end, the protagonist turns the tide and solves the problem. It's really down-to-earth. It's disgusting. It's a very male gaze.

Who on earth said that the heroine is not a virgin?

My family, I love it so much. I love it so much. The writing is really good, the details are so well described, and the plot is so innovative. There are many parts of this book that I want to read in the reading appreciation mode. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! Like!!!!!

The front is well conceived and attractive, but it lacks stamina. The supporting characters and even teammates are a bit thin. It was good to watch at first, but then the story was bland and not very good. After getting in touch with the male protagonist, the plot started to go downhill. I read the whole book intermittently, and the ending was rather rushed.

The heroine is more beautiful and stronger than the virgin, but she is smart and powerful at the same time.

How should I put it, if according to my strict standards, this article can only be regarded as average, but among the seven cats, it is definitely good-looking. I like the character of the heroine, but in many cases the Virgin is not necessary, and the group portraits do not necessarily have to be composed of people saved by the heroine. Male protagonist. . . . To be honest, the characterization is too little and the sense of presence is too low. There were a lot of portrayals of the supporting characters in the early stage, but the disconnection in the later stage caused a sense of fragmentation. The supporting characters in the later stage were sloppily portrayed because of the rush to the end. This is why I think it is average, because it is anticlimactic, and it is obvious that many things have not been developed, many characters have not been portrayed, and the male and female protagonists have not even had rich emotions before it ended. At first I thought the shrinking circle was a small climax, but it turned out to be a prelude to the end. However, it can be seen that the author's imagination and the ending are OK. Although the ending is very normal and has an infinite flow conventional ending (the ending that has passed the review), if you have the conditions to write a full-length novel, improve the world view and the character settings of the protagonist and supporting characters, and not be affected by force majeure factors, it will definitely be very interesting. It is a pity. And now this feeling has come to an abrupt end. . . . Tsk, it's really uncomfortable. Above.

The pace is very fast, and I keep changing scenes to face various dangers, and I got a little tired by the end.

Very pretty