I Yearn to Ascend to Immortality

It's a decent read, the plot is acceptable, but the exciting moments could be improved. Keep up the good work!

Thank you for your hard work, author! Keep it up!

I like the main characters, but the plot is too messy to watch. The Spring Examination was over, and I was suddenly transported to the Eternal Night Domain. It's inexplicable; you just need to gradually advance the plot. The book itself isn't very long, and the beginning of Eternal Night is a jumbled mess. Is this even a complete book?

There's a shadow of sword coming.

I like to skip around in my writing, and I often type several lines at a time...

Oh my god!

Aside from being a bit of a letdown, everything else was great.

It was quite enjoyable to watch, but unfortunately, the ending was too rushed.