Heavenfall

If possible, I think the author can first read how other people write good novels. The writing style is a bit broken later, and the plot connection is a bit behind, but it is still very interesting.

It's good to watch. It's very good to read after the first 50 chapters. I recommend everyone to read it.

The first part looks okay, but the second part is unfinished, not to mention who the heroine is. The heroine has not yet been decided. First, she has sex with Xiaoyu, and then she gets married to Qianqian. It makes me sick.

If I met the protagonist in this book, I would kill him immediately What is so naive and unattainable, does he have it but do I have it? Or one day when I form a team, I don't want others to point at the corpse and say with a smile, "Look, they're two fucks, rubbish."

The front is good, but the back is getting worse and worse

Don't read it, the logic behind it is very confusing and the reasons are far-fetched, as if someone else had written it.

Some of the plots are very exciting and seductive, and the improvement in strength is not morbid, but the author's portrayal of the Virgin's heart is indeed a bit too much, but overall this book is still very exciting. For those who only read the first or middle part, I can't change their views. Generally speaking, the first part is very good, the middle is a bit slow, but the later part is okay. Finally, I will dissuade those who only like to read pure and refreshing articles.

The plot becomes more and more rubbish later on, even if a woman is killed, she can bear it

The early stage is not a cool novel, the protagonist is very weak, and the first stage of the story is well written; some comments say that Holy Mother, this is a matter of opinion, but I think it is okay, not too over the top; the battle scenes, sensational scenes and other descriptions are average, with insufficient preparation or insufficient writing power; and the most uncomfortable thing is that it has to write many female protagonists. The protagonist is a character who sticks to the original intention, is kind and responsible, but ends up having relationships with several girls. The impression is extremely bad and the character is extremely contradictory.

It's okay, the plot is classic