Online Game: Lord of the Wheel of Fate

It is not as good as the previous three books in terms of content, details, logic and character polishing: the plot is rigid, the language is blunt, the characters are mostly self-righteous and have no personal characteristics, the villains are all the same heinous and stupid, the righteous are all the same righteous and witty, the characters all seem to be mass-produced from the assembly line, not three-dimensional enough, and have no distinctive characteristics. One or two is fine, but it is a bit disgusting if the main characters are all like this. In addition, the logic is full of loopholes, and the Shanghai Fortress of the apocalypse is described from the perspective of current reality, which can only be said to be copied and pasted many times, which disgusts the audience. As for how disgusting the method is, I don't want to recall it. If you are interested, you can read it yourself. Then there is the serious problem of the protagonist forcibly establishing a character. For example, in order to show the protagonist's intelligence, the villain is forcibly reduced in intelligence. For example, in order to show the protagonist's affinity, the supporting characters and the audience are brainwashed. For example, in order to show the protagonist's determination, the protagonist has to put on a magical costume without naked skin to fight the BOSS. Another example is to forcefully arrange a group of "spots" and slap them in the face to show the protagonist's unexpected operation... Also, in order to avoid the pride of the protagonist, the supporting characters always make some operations that seem reasonable but are actually mind-numbing. If it can be logically consistent, it is not unacceptable, but the key is that its starting point is unreasonable, and the final effect is to further disgust the audience. Then there is the emotional drama. Let's just say that if you don't know how to write it, then don't write it, right? The part about Yin Lingsha really made me vomit. Yin first fell in love with the protagonist who was not even a casual relationship for some reason, and tricked the protagonist into going on a night out for a tryst. Then the protagonist knew about it and did not refuse. He went happily when there was someone he liked. Finally, he met Yin. After chatting all night, not only did he reveal all the information that was kept secret by the military, but the relationship he developed in one night was comparable to the relationship he had with his girl for several months, and other people just blindly matched them up without any care. It was really speechless and disgusting... In my personal opinion, the emotional drama is the best, followed by the Great Voyage, and then the Tianxiang. This one is at least two levels worse than the Tianxiang... I hope I can see this last part. I have finished the first three books of Lao Ming, and this is the only one missing. To tell the truth, The Wheel of Life is no worse than most online books in the world, but maybe it's because the first three books were so good that Lao Ming's status was too high in my heart, so I was quite disappointed after reading this book. The same principle applies to the Fate Wheel. Lao Ming should not have such strength. His writing power should be stronger. However, the strength of the Fate Wheel is really not worthy of Lao Ming's strength. I feel that Lao Ming's polishing of the book is not delicate enough, as if it is a rushed work. Because I occasionally write novels or something, and although I have never published them, I can understand Lao Ming to a certain extent. To write well, you really have to consider every character, and sometimes I still can't express what I want to express. It feels really hard. But if it is not written well, it is not written well, so I hope that Lao Ming can sum up his experience and build a more exciting world.

It's hard to describe, I'd say it's good, I'm so angry, I'd say it's not good, I watched 40% more Let's talk about it first, I don't know, I just kept reading anyway, the theme and setting are not new, but I just kept reading, probably because he is invincible. What I can't say right now is that it's a little bit poisonous to me. 1. I was targeted by the Huang family in the early stage, and was assassinated at the door of my house. After it was over, I went to play the dungeon in the second chapter? Leave a note for your sister? Be safe? Are you kidding me? I'm the villain. I don't care what you do. I'll screw your sister to pieces. The villain here is just like the good guy, and the protagonist is just like the 25-year-old boy. It's just for fun! 2. The army will help you deal with the Huang family's blockade and assassination. If you don't want to go, it doesn't matter. You don't care about your sister anyway, but why do you have to be both responsible and independent? I won't join, but I can accept your kindness? Don't talk about what benefits he can bring to the military and the country in the future. When has he not received a high price or exchanged for good things? Are you just an immature bastard with a naive outlook and way of thinking? Are you afraid of not having a future or being marginalized? I won't go into details, because it would be too much to elaborate on. In short, it's just two words, childish. 3. Let's not talk about deliberately not taking off the mask. After all, it is the character water, which is normal. But what does it mean when you wrote about the ancient martial arts competition (Lingsha's time) that a noble family and any officer could cover the sky with one hand? A discerning person, oh no, a human being can see and understand things. If you insist on a picture that if a child of a noble family speaks out, other people will lose their brains. What's funny is that it can even make the protagonist "choked" when he says it? Choking? Choking? Gift Crab, oh man, our protagonist is really a giant baby! Hey, hey, you actually said that to me! I am the condemned one! My destiny is up to me! I am the protagonist! I...(Choked) Just like Satoru 2.5, It turns out the clown is myself! Of course, there is nothing wrong with the character itself, but the portrayal is so poisonous that it is hard to imagine. I am invincible all the way to the same level, and I am "choked" by a few words. It really makes me laugh to death, and there are a lot of unresolved plots. I won't talk about it in order to write more. Normally, to put it simply, the poison makes me not vomit and unhappy, but I can still continue to watch it, but I really can't completely lose my mind and watch it. If I can do it, I can still watch it. After all, although he is "choking", he is invincible, so it can still pass the time.

I've finished reading this, a book review that's a year late... It should have been in Dadu, but I'm used to it, so I won't say anything complaining. Good luck, see you next book (although I may not be able to read it) 🙃🙉

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How could such a stupid book get high marks?

As always, it is a Chinese waste novel. It can be said that the Chinese only know about internal fighting from beginning to end. Other countries are hundreds of millions times stronger and there is absolutely no internal fighting. The supporting characters are mindlessly targeting the protagonist, and the protagonist is cheating in all kinds of ways.

The early stage was good, but I couldn't stand it anymore in Chapter 37. There was a ghostly fire. The protagonist offended the villain and was almost killed. He was saved by a military boss, but he actually refused to join the military. You are a poor man, and your brother died of illness in 2 months. Aren't you afraid that the villain will kill your brother and sister? Then he left a note at home and left? ? ? ? It seems like I'm going to say, hehe, brother and sister, I have offended the villain, please sacrifice yourself to the heavens and wait for me to avenge you. It's really disgusting. It's like the author wrote this novel to disgust people.

Is the author a masochist? He writes about the country, the soldiers, and the protagonist as weak and weak. He waits for others to bully him every time. After fighting back, he calms down the situation. Several countries join forces to attack you and torture and kill your people. You actually treat the prisoners preferentially. There are too many points to complain about.

Got it! When I saw Chapter 35, it was like feeding people S. You knew that this was not an ordinary game, but you were so awesome online that you killed his father in front of him, but they didn't bother you offline? After logging off, he went straight home as if it was nothing serious. He was the protagonist. If it were an ordinary person, he could have set up a grave.

After only a few dozen chapters, the talent effects started to be messed up. It was rubbish.