Harry Potter: Vampire Villain? Please Call Me Savior

I can't understand it even though it's pretty, but I can actually understand it, but his sentences are not fluent and it's hard to get into it. Also, sometimes I wonder if there is one protagonist or two. Now it's him or my brother, younger brother, younger sister, older sister, it's so annoying.

The sentences don't make sense, there are a lot of typos, and I can't read a little bit.

I can't understand, I'm confused

I don't understand, why is it written in perspective?

I can't understand it, the camera angle jumps frequently, and I don't know what it's talking about.

Why are they all bad sentences?

The article is so confusing

? After reading it for a long time, I found that I couldn't understand it at all. It was really confusing.

The setting of this book is pretty good. The plot is just too confusing. I can't figure out the pronoun at all. The meaning is also unclear. And there are a lot of typos. The perspective keeps changing.

It's annoying to have to jump around in the camera angle, but I thought the plot was pretty well written.