Many Children, Many Blessings, Another Senior Sister Is Pregnant

The whole book is generally very good. It starts with the previous one. There are a lot of cars in the front, a lot of water in the back, and fewer cars. The process is very pitiful. I suggest you read more of the process. The ending is a bit fast. Overall it is good. Recommended for everyone to watch (for reference only)

The author's ideas are good, but his memory is not good, the data before and after does not match, and his logical ability is worrying. Pig's Feet went to Jinling to check the sect's business and found that the ghosts were not looking for the city lord but their competitors. It was ridiculous. The only ghosts in the sky of Jinling City were three people with Pig's Feet and a dozen guards. Why is the author's brain circuit so strange?

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The writing is terrible, disrespectful to the readers, and deliberately stuck in levels. The protagonist of this book has been promoted to the intermediate yellow level three times. The most outrageous thing is that he was promoted to the advanced yellow level between the second and third times and then dropped back to the intermediate yellow level the third time. It took hundreds of years of experience for the protagonist to practice Qi from Dzogchen to Dzogchen. Many people may not understand what I say. , That is, the protagonist does not break through when he reaches the Great Perfection of Qi Training, and is wasting hundreds of years of experience just for fun. The protagonist of this book only breaks through the first level of foundation building in fifty chapters, and breaks through the first level of alchemy in one hundred chapters. This book has only two hundred and forty chapters in total. I don't understand what the author wants to write. You can't break through four major realms in a row with only one hundred and forty chapters, right? I mentioned before that the chapter about the Great Thousand Worlds is not enough. According to one great realm in Chapter 50, it is not enough to break through even three great realms, and the practice will definitely get slower and slower. In the later stage, you will not be able to touch the Great Thousand Worlds, and you may not even be able to touch Mahayana. You have perfected your qi training to the point where it takes thirty chapters to build the first level of foundation. Are you an uncharacteristically bad person? According to your early progress, writing this book will require at least 500 chapters, but it will end in 240 chapters. As a free novel, it is based on the number of readers who are reading instead of rewards. You have pissed off the readers. You only rely on rewards, and you just ended it when you found that you can't make money? Isn't this a typical case of putting the cart before the horse? This is not a certain place, a certain place can rely solely on tips to make a living. After all, you have to pay to read books there, so naturally you are not short of the rice from the tips.

The pace at the beginning is okay, the plot is good, the plot is exciting, and the characterization is okay, but once you get to the end, it feels like you are rushing to schedule. The pace is a bit fast, and the driving plot is all gone. Compared with the previous one, it doesn't feel like it was written by one person. I don't know how the name of the city lord came to be the same for the city lords of two places. Generally speaking, it is still recommended (mainly because the pace at the end is a bit fast and the description is not very good, so I will deduct big points)

The more I look at it, the weirder it becomes. It would be meaningless to abolish the sect rule that only recruits female disciples in Lingyin later.

There are so many female protagonists that your two city lords have the same name, right? Don't write down so many people if you can't remember their names😅

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The storyline is okay, but it lacks a sense of reality, just like a delicacy without salt! Not very moving! No reason! The senior painter painted a dragon and a tiger but no bones! It's not enough to draw the eyes!

I originally came here for Sese, so forget about the process. The writing style in other places is still poor, and the logic in many places doesn't make sense 😂😂. I tried to read Chapter 34, but I couldn't stand it anymore.