My Scumbag Fiancé Ran Away from Our Wedding, So I Married Someone Else on the Spot

I like sweet pampering novels. I have read every book by the author. They are not abusive or verbose. I like them, especially "The Daily Life of a Pampered Lady". Maybe it's because there are too many emotions in life that are difficult to calm down. Reading the author's book brings you into yourself, and you can also imagine your own perfection while reading the book!

The plot is very novel and the writing is very good. Especially the character of the male protagonist. He is really a very responsible husband. He can respect and protect even if he has no feelings. The female protagonist is not just a white flower. She knows how to protect her own rights and has outstanding abilities. However, it just feels like some parts are not very logical. For example, the heroine was severely criticized when she grew up, so she should not be a nosy person. After all, she is in trouble. But around chapter 40, she will go to save Xuan Ling. Moreover, the characters of the supporting characters are not very rich. I just feel that Xuan Ling can grow up as a concubine and is often treated harshly and bullied. How can she be such a stupid and simple person? At least you know not to quarrel with that Xuanyi, right? Even if you are often bullied by your eldest sister, you should be a bit more cautious, right? (The above are all personal opinions, don't criticize me, you can refute me and convince me with your own opinions)

It's a very interesting story, but it's quite painful to tie it! Looking forward to the author's updates every day! This is the first time I read a story about this theme. The author is very serious and responsible. The plot is rich and the suspense and doubt points are developed in subsequent stories. The characters are three-dimensional and full, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is delicate and unremarkable! I'm really looking forward to the next story. I hope the author can work hard on coding and update more often.

I was amazed when I read the first few chapters. I basically read the rest of it at a glance. I spent a long time writing about small things. I couldn't bear to read almost a hundred chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. One sentence to end the article (too wordy)

The author's writing style is so awesome. It can be seen that he has real writing skills and is not mechanically copied. The plot is coherent and organized, and the logic is clear. It is not a bad guy who has the final word. It is a cool article. He talks about it and quotes from classics. The rating is a bit low. Give the author a call.

When will the male lead get better? I'm looking forward to these two cubs (¯▽¯)

First of all, the pace is too slow for the overall length. In the first chapter, the fiancé escapes from the marriage, and it is not until the 70th chapter that the fiancé carries his concubine in. The emotional scenes between the two protagonists are also too slow. Baizhang has never held hands before. They just eat, drink tea and chat every day. As expected, they treat each other like guests. Secondly, as for the character narrative, everyone's personality is similar, there is no particularly attractive protagonist or supporting character, they are very ordinary and mediocre. And from the many repeated narrations, it can be seen that the author's writing style is very average. There is nothing in common between the male and female protagonists. The female protagonist basically lives her life waiting for death. Apart from being a little pretty, she has no merits. She does not do business or run a shop, nor does she pave the way for her husband's family or her younger brother. There is no involvement in business or politics. The couple does not know what they are educating their adopted son every day. [This kind of book can be read by novices. The layout is too small. It will be difficult for those who have read the big text to read it again. The progress in all aspects is very slow. The length of the narrative feels like writing and posting one page after another. I also doubt whether the author has an outline for this book. In a word, don't fall into the trap]

The beginning of this story is exciting, but there is no outstanding follow-up support, so the story seems very dull after it unfolds. The female protagonist does not show enough wisdom, so it seems that the male protagonist really likes her because of her "lust". As a plot of a otaku, the character design is too stereotyped.

Although it is a cookie-cutter routine that is very common nowadays, the author writes it very well, with full characters and smooth plot. Many sentences in the article show that the author is very talented, which is rare in current Internet articles. Most of these authors like to write from the bottom of their hearts and put their heart and soul into their works. Support the author greatly, come on.

1/If you can't write about ordinary life in an interesting way, don't write about meaningless daily life, repeating a few paragraphs like a TV series, and repeating the same words, the word count of "water" is really low. 2/The story in the early stage is quite interesting, and the male protagonist is still an attractive character. After the heroine's stepmother is offline, the quality of the interaction between the male and female protagonists seriously deteriorates, and it is boring. Forget it. Later, the heroine completely looks like a spoiled wife, and the male protagonist starts to become greasy. 3/More than 400 chapters so far, it has been clearly explained that the heroine marries in to deal with her stepmother, betrayal, and childbirth. The content is bland and the writing is immature, and the writing is extremely boring. 4/The content is complex, and one thing can be expressed clearly in one sentence. It is very long-winded and written in several large paragraphs. It is probably that the author does not understand the writing method of leaving blank space to let readers think for themselves. It looks like the writing style of an elementary school student.