I Make Money While the Sect Competes, and My Cultivation Is Five Thousand Years Ahead

Hahaha~ How dare Rong Jinshu come to seek death on his own? Didn't he say that the heroine is "I won't offend others if they don't offend me, and I will turn against others if they offend me"? Why do you care about so many things? If you unexpectedly seek death, it would be a good idea to transform into Zhizhi and meet the opportunity. It is also good to know that people around you are impressed by the attraction, but knowing that you will probably suffer a loss! But ( ´•ω•)ノ(._.`) It's okay, it's nice that someone is loving and caring for Zhizhi hehe `(*∩_∩*)′

So-so, what touched me the most in this book was the brotherhood between the heroine and Luo, but the male protagonist, maybe because he appeared too little, which made me feel that the heroine's feelings for the male protagonist were a bit abrupt. I felt it would be better if there was no male protagonist. Also, the order of the three chapters in the middle was out of order, which was very annoying. And the last point is the arrangement of the male protagonist's identity, which I really feel is a little bit bad. •• Okay, that's it, if you have any questions, come and discuss it with me.ヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

I always feel that there is nothing particularly interesting, no dramatic conflicts, and it is relatively flat.

It just felt like it was too short, it felt a bit sudden at the end, and there were a few repetitive chapters.

It is unreasonable to break through the golden elixir without thunder tribulation

I feel sorry for the female supporting role, being bullied by everyone.

Good

Except for the weak presence of the male protagonist, he is still good...

It always feels weird

So well written