My Immortal Ladies Have a Lot of Troubles

This author's "Order to Pick Immortals" is a classic of early immortal novels. I'm glad to see the author publish a new novel again. I have been collecting it on other reading platforms for a long time and have been waiting for it to be completed. Unexpectedly, I saw a free push on Qimao. Recently, Qimao has really published a lot of wonderful novels that I have read on other paid platforms, such as Xianjiao. In other words, the writing style of this article, the plot and hidden lines are very smooth, the logic is reasonable, and every mini-map is exciting. Unfortunately, I personally don't like stories related to ghouls, so after reading Chapter 200, I gave up even though there were still a lot of foreshadowings that I didn't understand. Friends who don't mind ghoul-type stories can give it a try, and you won't be disappointed.

I read this book twice, the second time I read it more slowly, but it made me laugh all the way through. Very good novel!

It's so annoying to have a line of dialogue followed by a line of narration! In the conversation between two people, they just said a few words, and many lines of narration were directly inserted! After that, he continued the unfinished words and inserted narration again! Breathe big breath! There is no dialogue that is finished quickly and then interjected with narration! After reading a hundred chapters, I feel confused and upset!

Isn't it just that the parents are gone? Isn't this normal in the world of immortality? The heroine is extremely miserable and lacks love.

This article feels confusing at times. The fighting scenes are not very descriptive, they are very perfunctory and only have good sound quality. Moreover, I have already established my foundation in the Cultivation of Immortality articles, but I haven't yet started to live in a new age. I have been describing food, and I feel that the Cultivation of Immortality articles and food do not go well with each other.

The style is similar to the author's other works: Picking the Immortal Order and Becoming an Immortal with One Finger. It's pretty good-looking! ! ! No CP, mainly please talk about the heroine's journey of resisting demons and protecting her homeland! In the later period, there was a linkage with Lu Lingxi and Lu Yue. The heroine's universe is actually the foreshadowing of the Coffin Col and the Taixu Cursed Insect in the Immortal Picking Order.

Is it related to the Immortal Picking Order written earlier? I just saw some similar ones.

It's enough to keep repeating the description of the heroine having no father or mother and being bullied and pitiful! She is a second-generation ancestor, but her fiancé is unreliable. He did a sect mission and gave all the gifts from the master to his biological son, her fiancé. The fiancé has his own interests and does not protect her! She also has the entire small valley with abundant spiritual energy and cultivation shop left by her father to support her... Not to mention the casual cultivators, even the sect is richer in resources than many people. She only mentions it once or twice, and mentions it countless times in less than a hundred chapters. She almost describes them as villains if they don't protect her. It's like the entire sect owes her! Even being punished to the point of crossing a cliff was what her master asked the execution hall to do, and the purpose was also to help her survive the calamity of death! How could a heroine with countless resources, opportunities, and popularity be so pitiful? It's really annoying to mention it too many times!

There is a pyrotechnic atmosphere and the characters are described delicately.

I'm looking forward to the author's next book. From Become an Immortal with One Finger to The Immortal Picking Order, and then My Fairies Are Sick, it's really interesting, each has its own independent story, but can be linked together.