Pokémon: Get Zapdos at the Start

I've been looking for Pokémon stories that have mythical beasts at the beginning, and I accidentally turned to this book. After reading dozens of chapters, I didn't feel very good about it. The routines of this book are very repetitive, and it is the kind of mindless and enjoyable writing. Basically, people look down on him, slap him in the face, and then accept it. And even when he became a famous trainer, no one knew him and thought he just looked like him. Basically, when he fights against stronger enemies, passers-by always laugh at him. The world no longer has the goodwill of anime Pokémon. I see that there are not many good people so far. The protagonist is always ridiculed by the gym trainers when he challenges the gym. Basically, there are few passers-by in the gym. This book describes the Pokémon world as a malicious world that people circulate on the Internet. Personally, I find it very disgusting. Some people might enjoy your article if you write it in an urban article, but I can't stand your article based on slandering the world of Pokémon. It uses the plot of Pokémon to describe the situation in modern cities. When writing Pokémon fan fiction, you have to base it on the Pokémon world, or you write about Pokémon in the city, add new characters, and abandon the people in the anime. I really don't recommend this book at all, it's very, very ugly.

The writing is pretty good, but the plot jumps too fast.

So ugly

Looks better than I imagined 😀😀

Qimao's male videos are really good. Most of these 9.0 And above scores are pretty good if you put them on the partition board and get 7 points.

There are so many idiots in this book

Growing up too fast and not having a heroine is the biggest drawback

It started out okay, but towards the end it started to look a bit like a hoax.

I just feel that the author has a good idea. From my point of view, the author made the protagonist very powerful. Then, the subsequent plots were very messy. There was only one routine and then they were all defeated. I think it would be better to add another one who was defeated by others, and then let Jiangshan reflect on himself and see what mistakes he made. Another point is that I don't like that kind of thing, that is, it keeps talking about the kind of move, move, move, etc., To put us in that kind of battle scene, and not to let people lose their combat ability in one round of battle, to put people in a battle environment. This is a Pokémon book that we really want. And why not choose a wonderful pen to make flowers? Because he only managed to make the sentences flow smoothly, but did not sound realistic, so he did not choose clever writing.

The elves captured by the protagonist are outrageous, and the elves just captured can push the team.