My Senior Sister Rejected My Confession, but My Bewitching Master Actually Threw Herself at Me

At first, I thought it was a single female protagonist. Of course, I read the introduction and knew that the male protagonist must have a story with several senior sisters, but I feel that the author's character design for the master is to write a single female protagonist. Of course, I also watched the harem, but I feel that if the master is really allowed to accept other things, the character design will be a bit broken. Personally, I think it's good to have only one Master.

When I saw Chapter 409, the conversation between Master and the protagonist, I felt as uncomfortable as eating a big meal. No one in novels about cultivating immortals says that one must have pure love or have a harem, but if you repeatedly jump between the two, it will look extremely confusing. The protagonist swears loyalty and unswerving loyalty in front of the Master, and then goes around to break the shoes. The Master exposes the situation and molds the Master into a fully accepting and tolerant image of a suffering master. The master also said something outrageous, "I know you have cuckolded me many times, but when I think of how you are so carefree in front of me, I can tolerate all these things." After that, the protagonist said sorry, and I almost wanted to use a fire fist on him. Novels about cultivating immortals like to say that the right way is duplicitous and the evil way is about satisfying grudges and grudges. The protagonist treats his lover one way in front of others and does another behind the scenes, and treats feelings like a show of love. What is the difference between this and the right way of being duplicitous? The character creation of the protagonist in this novel did not make me feel like a person in the evil way who is happy about grudges and grudges. , But it made me feel that a villain who is narrow-minded and submissive is created by the devil, but there is no sense of substitution or empathy at all. I feel that many mean people in life can find common ground with the protagonist. Once these people are substituted for the protagonist, I feel that the sky is falling when I read the novel.

How can I put it, it suits my taste anyway. You must know that for an LSP, articles like yours are the most eye-catching.

I haven't read much, only about 30 chapters, and I feel it's not as good as one written by AI. The female character's emotional changes are inexplicable. The male protagonist thinks he has a brain, but I can't understand the meaning of the senior sister giving the tickets. Blindly guessing that Teddy will take over the house later, either while driving piles or on the way to pile driving.

335 Is very good at writing at the beginning. The female protagonist is dirty. No matter what the reason is, she becomes dirty when she compromises. Even if the person she serves is the male protagonist, if it really happens, no matter how they recognize each other later, it will be a betrayal. And if you can compromise in your writing and agree in the first step, then you can compromise more.

Not bad, not bad, a bit interesting, but the pace feels a bit slow, especially the development between the protagonist and the heroine. It would be nice if it could be faster😎😎

Okay, I had to fix the part about my fiancée. I could have won the title of Master, but suddenly I did this. I can't blame you.

The author's obscene writing is purely intellectual, and the emotional advancement depends entirely on the heroine's own imagination🤮Fortunately, the plot has a good structure👍

It looks pretty good in the front, but I can't stand the words in the back. The more I look at it, The worse I'll follow it up in a few days and I can't stand it anymore. Can the author improve it?

A tuo, a pure tuo. Those who have never tried the defense can try it.