I Became Garp's Twin Brother

Good

The appearance of Xiao He was so sudden, but the protagonist actually accepted her and called her cute? The innocence and innocence along the way are completely different from the character who is determined to become stronger after experiencing the death of her loved ones. I would rather see her with a cold temperament but a kind heart.

You can read it, but not much, a bit of time travel stories, a bit of Long Aotian and a bit of old-age care stories.

What? You are so powerful and yet you are pretending to be a slap in the face. You are inconsistent and you have done so much foreshadowing. A waste is a waste. You are not a waste after gaining the power of others. What is it about? No wonder it is described so powerfully. It turns out that the protagonist is a waste. He just wants to scare others to death. Why look at others and sneer? Do you know that Long Aotian is better than your protagonist? You still let others go crazy.

It's nonsense, and I don't know what the point of having a little girl on the side is. The author can't write anything and relies on a little girl to make up the word count.

The system has no sense of existence. Looking at the directory system, it seems that it only reappeared in the last chapter.

Read a few chapters. I won't talk about anything, I don't really like the character. The setting is that of an old man, and his behavior is the same as that of a young man. (I know because the protagonist is a young man who traveled through time). But you don't have to set it like this, right? I am an old man, but my attitude is young. And he also has a tendency to have affairs with young women (see table of contents). Either all young people, or just old men. This kind of contradictory setting is really uncomfortable for my obsessive-compulsive disorder.

All I can say is that it's so well written, don't write it again.

Except for repeating a few paragraphs in each chapter, it was pretty good. The system had no sense of existence at all, and it came out at the end.

This is the most useless system I have ever seen.