Naruto: Devil Fruit System

It's a great book with a lot of original content by the author, though the timeline is a bit messy. The Ninja World War part, in particular, got me really excited, but I stopped reading after it moved to space.

It seems like the author has never even watched Naruto.

Regardless of your own strength or the opponent's strength, it takes forever to fight, and you're still panting afterward. Why don't you just call it the "50/50 System"? And the Rumble-Rumble Fruit has tens of millions of volts; can anyone really stop that?

The battles are so drawn out! Is the protagonist supposed to be a 50/50 fighter? Regardless of strength, they take forever to fight. A battle that could be ended with a teleport and a single strike is dragged out by endless combos.

It doesn't look particularly good.

The plot is completely mindless and just keeps padding the word count.

That's terrible. I recommend watching "Starting with Dual Godmother".

From Naruto to outer space, his fighting power seems to fluctuate wildly, and every fight feels incredibly strenuous.

The author may be young.