From the Start, I Became the Most Miserable Zombie

After reading the first seven chapters, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. Even if the rest of the novel was good, the beginning was not attractive and no one wanted to read it. I also felt very strange that a novel like this could get a rating of 8.8.

Defeat a group of Taoist priests and then let them go?? Are they your ancestors? You don't even take the initiative to become stronger, but you still swing around with a hammer.

My head is all messed up when I read it, I don't know what I'm writing. This is my first time to leave a negative review😡

Various settings are unreasonable. The zombies are vampires, and the zombies have corpse energy instead of resentment. I won't say that you have a spirit and you can see it. You **** can speak human language, and you can't even control your limbs. You speak Mandarin like crazy. When writing fan fiction, you have to respect the original work. If you don't follow the six realms, you are afraid of death. I remember that in the original work, all the zombies were burned to death. You ×× are so afraid of being drowned. I'm laughing so hard.

It's a mess, it's confusing, it gives me a headache to look at it

The rest of the plot has been written out of the system.

The protagonist is a bit too ruthless and feels sorry for Nianying. Why does she need to use a knife when she is so good? Wouldn't it be enough to turn Nianying into a zombie?

What the hell are you writing about?

You are a zombie, do you need to become a normal person? As we get to the back, we have a rough relationship with the zombies.

After reading more than ten chapters, the protagonist is a zombie. Zombies know how ugly they are. It is scary and describes the protagonist with a little white hair on his head. Then he meets the female protagonist named Mr. New Zombie. The female protagonist thinks she is very handsome. The protagonist zombie says a few words to the female protagonist. The female protagonist blushes and is poisonous. A normal person and a zombie can flirt with each other. The female protagonist must have never seen a man. An ordinary person will feel handsome when he sees a zombie. He blushes after saying a few words. He is a chicken disease and a nymphomaniac. He must not poison people to death.