My Doomsday Fortress on Wheels

Chaoying, the heroine of this book, satisfies my fantasies about girls. She is generous and generous. She always helps the hero to overcome difficulties, comforts and encourages him at critical moments. She is well-educated and sensible. She has no arrogant character or annoying princess disease. She is like a big sister next door. She dares to express her feelings and also bravely reveals her "scar" to the hero. Everyone has given up on her and only the hero stays with her. As mentioned later in the book, it is all because of love. Love can change everything. Chaoying is a really well-written character. I think the author has done a good job on some details, actions and expressions. I love this character very much. In fact, I feel that the change in the plot is a bit too sudden. I suddenly separated and traveled to the future. There is basically no emotional scene with the heroine or the end of the world, so it seems a bit boring. Then the protagonist realizes in the cosmic consciousness that the heroine and the protagonist's puppy Sam have already died in the explosion of the space rift. This makes me uncomfortable. I feel that the rest of the writing is a bit too fast. After creating the world Although I met Sam and the heroine again with a little selfishness from the hero, I still felt a bit empty, because the separation in the middle was too sudden, and the rest of it was a bit irrelevant to the original plot. What I originally thought was that they would find a way to understand the truth later, and then change the constraints of fate. The two of them would live a happy life forever. Although the ending was okay, I still felt that it was not interesting, it was too fast! ! But since this book is the author's first book, I am relieved. I think this book should not be rated so low. I hope more people will discover this book! I also hope that the author will continue to create better novels

It's too verbose. You're not a scientist or anything. I promised to be a mechanic, but one day Luo Liba said that a lot of war machines are still so weak. In order to survive, you shouldn't try every means to survive. You should also study things that have nothing to do with you. It's not like you're on your honeymoon and you can't figure it out. The subject matter is very good, but the content turns out to be a bit too big.

I read it as a cool article at first, but in the end it became very deep.

The protagonist has no brain So weak You can still watch a few pictures while riding in the car, but there is no way to watch them later. The ink marks are so special

This book has such a lofty name, but it turned out that the name should be called "The Two-Dimensional Revolution Caused by a Bad Book". Generally speaking, a worker who can't repair cars and build Gundams is not a good writer.

The plot is confusing and can't be watched

After reading more than 20 chapters, the mechanic's skills are only used to make a car? (Mobile Fortress) Isn't it good to be a robot army?

Our Lady

It's the end of the world, but we still took a group photo! Return the body! Buried in the snow? Or take it with you in the car?

If you can't stand the bad writing, don't write this kind of article. I beg you. I want to write the protagonist as a very rational person. I can understand, but rationality does not allow you to ignore life. Fortunately, you were a soldier and which army taught you.