One Sleep, Ten Thousand Years

When I got to Sinian, I suspected that someone else had written it. Can't you stay at the Black Rock City base to develop? Especially when you go to the Sun Temple to find people, your force value is so high, just talk to them and just knock down the city gate and leave. Repeatedly, the group of city lords also wanted to snatch the heroine when they saw her.

152 To 153 are out of context, it's as inexplicable as a joke, I don't know what it means? The plot doesn't feel like a main line. It just ends there. The emotional line makes people a little interested, but the writing is really not good. I suggest the author to write romance novels on female channels.

Much better than other articles, the rating is seriously low.

The plot is really good at the beginning, but the character of the protagonist becomes more and more uncomfortable later on. You can't watch this male video with your silly character.

Feeling a bit messy

The subject matter at the beginning is very novel, but how does it change later on? I went to someone else's house to eat and was poisoned. If I want the antidote, I go home and draw pictures. This is too holy.

There are many typos and some skipped chapters. A part of the plot jumped out of nowhere. The subsequent plot is also very sloppy.

The first part was okay, the second part of the trip to South America was just okay, but the trip to the Kingdom of Sinian was tacky.