The Golden Age of Pokemon

The first few dozen chapters seemed okay, but later they were all pretense and slap in the face. If you don't write an elf novel with a good plot, where can you use pretense to slap in the face? It's OK to write less questions. Originally, it was really disgusting to read too much. But when I saw almost 300 chapters, 20% of the plot is important, 30% is pretentious and slapped in the face, and 30%, the author's poisonous and brainless foil used to slap the face is disgusting.

The quasi-legend is worthless

It's fast-paced, and you're basically invincible before you even get 50 pictures, and it's so uncanny that everything you write is useless.

I feel like the author is really not suitable for writing elf novels. The author can't even write the essence of humanities. And the pace is very fast. There are still many places that are unreasonable. And when I watch it, I always feel out of place. It seems that in the author's article, all strangers are enemies. I feel that the author is suitable for writing the kind of doomsday novel that kills decisively. And the character of the protagonist is really disliked. There are too many things I want to complain about, and the summary is that it doesn't look good.

Some water figures

There are quite a few typos.

Well, yours is much better than the Pokémon I've read before. You're especially a mythical beast. Other novels are all given by the mythical beast system, but what about you? Catch it yourself

The ending was a bit unfinished