One Piece: the Strongest Navy

It's a very good fanfic, the plot logic is clear, the combat power is no problem, and it follows the original work. However, there are still some shortcomings: 1. Smoothie is not a good person, and the fruits of the squeeze are not shown, so treating her as the heroine is not a wise move to be honest. 2. Now that Hawkeye has appeared, where is Perona, the Princess Mononoke? I remember she didn't go back to Moriah's place 3. What's the secret of the D family? Maybe it's because I haven't finished reading and am still behind it. 4. What Luffy writes is a bit too brainless, but Luffy still listens when it comes to serious matters. These are all personal opinions, but they are just details, so I still recommend jumping into the trap.

This novel is still okay, but the ending is a bit hasty.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 80. The more I look at the protagonist, the more she looks like a nanny, and she's the kind of nanny who knows the plot but can't change it. There are many more that I won't go into details one by one, but they are very unpleasant to watch.

Very pretty😘😘

The pirate part is very well written.

As a time-traveler, why do you have to surround yourself with the protagonist? He is more of a dog licker than a dog licker.

This is a good book. The only mistake is probably that the author wrote a lot of names wrong. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, the plot, character descriptions, etc. Are all very well written so far.

He was poisoned by pirates, but he let the pirates go; he wanted to join the navy, but he let the pirates go in front of the navy. Can the Monkey family make people feel helpless?

Licking pirates, what kind of navy do you want to be?

Not bad, give it a good review.