Siheyuan: After Qin Huairu Called Off the Engagement, the Traveling Frog Came Online

Don't be fooled by the beginning; the rest of the story is just constant arguing and completely unreadable. Plus, the author's use of commas is ridiculous; it sounds like they're stuttering.

Make do, make do.

It's tiring to read even a few words per line. It's so padded out; a small thing takes up several chapters.

Can you be a little more realistic? If you haven't watched any TV dramas about courtyard houses, don't bother writing this; it's a waste of your time.

Li Huaide actually helped Sha Zhu?! Factory Director Yang, for the sake of a cook, refused to help the doctor who saved his life, and even tried to smooth things over?! Could you please write something even more outrageous?

There are over 200 chapters in total. Fifty or sixty chapters were used up in just one all-staff meeting. It's fine if it's well-written, but it's nothing at all.

If you don't know how to use punctuation, then don't use it.

What are you writing, rambling on and on?

What's with the late-night word count padding? It's cheeky, isn't it?