After Reborn, I Married My Pure First Love and Built My Fortune Again!

Although the template of a wife with a daughter at the beginning is popular, the plot flow and plot are natural, the male and female protagonists are relatively fleshed out, and the strategies in business wars are also very exciting. There is no twist in the story, and the male protagonist is calm, courageous and responsible. It is a good novel that I have read recently, and I will continue to follow it. I have to say that the entertainment segment is really good-looking and easier to portray than the plot of opening a supermarket. Suggestion to increase some interactions with lower class people? Although I can understand the single heroine in the emotional line, I still hope there will be other emotional plots, and it doesn't necessarily have to be a harem. After all, whether it is ambiguous or unrequited, it is considered an emotional line. The characterization of the supporting characters can be enriched. The characterization of a character is not necessarily single, but can be enriched through complex and diverse personalities. For example, a bad guy can also do some good things because of his conscience.

Needless to say, I am now reading Chapter 28. In one sentence, it kills 99% of novels instantly.

From the moment the protagonist's father-in-law disregarded his granddaughter's life and threatened the protagonist with her granddaughter's life, and finally the protagonist had to go to the hospital to visit him, it felt like Holy Mother, disgusting

It's good-looking, not mindless, it's much better than the average city pretense and slap in the face!

The content is far-fetched. Isn't it ridiculous to create a deeply romantic setting for a woman who can sleep with her and climb up?

Very exciting

The writing was good at the beginning, but it fell apart later when the business war turned into a power struggle. I wanted to write but didn't dare to write clearly, so it ended hastily and the ending of many people was not made clear. The timeline spans a very long time and I wrote it almost to the actual timeline. It seems that I couldn't continue writing and cut it in half.

Very good

Good

Let's look at the trend as it continues to be written. It involves line struggles. I follow the facts closely. Aren't you afraid of 404? Take it easy. The book will be gone in a while.