Maximum Level of Comprehension: Guarding the Treasury for Twenty Years

What a mess. The male protagonist has a system and reaches the Shen Zang stage in one year. Others who don't have a system can reach the Shen Zang stage in one year. She doesn't have a system and is still talented. She is talented. She can practice to the Shen Zang stage in one year! ! ! No matter how hard the male protagonist practices later, he will still be half a year ahead of others! ! System, is it a pig? ? ?

"Who said that I, Wu Shang, am destined to be a mortal? I will make this day change color and make everyone in the world kneel at my feet." "Drink!". Wu Shang scolded coldly and slashed forward with the long sword in his hand. The color of the world changed instantly! It can be seen from a distance that a crack has been torn open in the space not far away.

There are a lot of holes left unfilled, the protagonist's wife? The opening kitten? Three ghosts' body art? As well as the origin of the sword pool of his own dynasty, there are a lot of things that are not written, and it is anticlimactic.

"Mortal Sutra": Thousands of years ago, a hundred years, hundreds of years, author It's really 666, the year changes often, right?

The protagonist's understanding is incredible, his aptitude is invincible, and he has cheats, but he gets stuck in the Heaven-Bearing Realm at random. Other people just practice and become better than the protagonist. There are also new magic and secret methods every day, but they can't be faster than others. Just to show off in order to have an opponent? Or a cool article? No-brainer setup

The idea is good, but it lacks killing power. It only brags but does not sell beef. The logical thinking is not rigorous enough.

This book is like a 1,000-meter track. The first 50 meters are colorful and comfortable, but suddenly a hand turns the track into a ball of sackcloth. If others are bad, this is their bad face! It's impossible to read even up to the neck.

There are many typos and wrong words, and the plot lines are confusing.

The author wrote that after Zhou Yi got married, his sister Zhou Ling died of natural causes, and the Tianling Sect disappeared. Oh, what a good start.

What is the system used for? Others: mortal + system ≥ genius, novice + system ≥ evildoer, you, genius + system ≤ genius without system?