Hogwarts: a Match Made in Heaven

Although it looks good, Fufu suddenly disappeared in the later stage... And there is not a word about the system. Although whether there is a system or not has nothing to do with the article, it is a bit of a problem if a person as big as Fufu is gone.

From the moment I saw the double wear you prepared, it was a trap! Are you still preparing for your childhood sweetheart? Do you have any pie? Also, the system clearly states that there are rewards for helping each other, but when another person is embarrassed, the system merges into one. What is this in the face of human nature? It doesn't matter whether you read it or not, it's just one effort, the other is missing, or is dead, or it's mutual. There are people who write double penetrations in fan fiction, are you sure you can write it well? Especially when you let a woman prevent a man from formatting his phone? Are you afraid that there will be some big cake?

First, the title of the book is "A Match Made in Heaven", but 90% of the plots in the world are plots with only male protagonists, and the female protagonist doesn't even have as much of a role as Ron; Secondly, the plot is very novel. It breaks away from the plot of the original work to a certain extent and adds a lot of its own storyline, which is really good; Thirdly, the plot connection in some parts of the article is not smooth, and the transitions between characters and plots are unclear; Fourth, there are some established facts in the article that are inconsistent with the original work. It is suspected that the author has not read the original work in detail, and the sources of some original creatures or props are made up by himself; Fifth, there are at least five typos in each chapter. I don't know if the author has checked the article he wrote.

It's very good-looking, and it's one of the best among HP fics. It doesn't have too much romance, and the protagonist who is pursuing a career is so cool.

This book is amazing, the theory is invincible!

There is a lot of unnecessary theoretical knowledge, the introduction does not match the main text, and the original characters are not well portrayed, which is weird.

The front is a fanfic written by the author, and the back is directly the original text of Harry Potter.

There are many moments in the plot of this novel that don't make sense and are inconsistent.

Double-piercing, the woman at the back disappears, and you can't see her in dozens of chapters. What's the point of writing about her? There is also the protagonist's attitude towards the three-person group. The contrast between before and after is too great. To be honest, it becomes increasingly ugly later on. Should you write about the protagonist or the three little ones?

Wrong review, I can't watch it later