Bright Sword: I Replaced Li Yunlong as Factory Director and Took Shanxi by Storm

A battle of 20,000 miles, the journey is difficult and dangerous and the rain is close to it. The sound of the roaring storm was deafening, and the rushing river wet the military uniforms.

The author has no understanding of the ranks of the troops. The various names in the article are confusing and the plot does not match up. The same sentence is repeated many times. The number of words in the article is quite serious, which is difficult to accept.

I can barely read what I wrote at the beginning of this book, and it makes me feel very uncomfortable. The foreshadowing is really thick, and the rest is much more exciting, with strategies and tactics, my IQ is back, and I feel like the author is also growing. Friends who want to abandon the book, I hope you can read it patiently.

Can you respect history? Dare to write anything. How did you pass it?

I don't know how it got to 9 points. I don't understand the military structure. Can a position like an instructor be appointed at will? The numbers don't match up, the names don't match up, the positions don't match up, it's a complete mess.

I don't even understand the basic structure of the army.

It's just like a divine drama, but it's still difficult to read smoothly.

Scribbling, I don't know what I'm doing, it feels like it was written by AI

It's such a mess. There are several battalion commanders in a battalion's establishment! I felt like throwing up after reading a few chapters!

It's so confusing, the names and positions don't match up