Mercenary 1929

If the author is writing about mercenaries, then you need to describe what mercenaries do, and the characters you've created. You've introduced so many characters and need to provide detailed information about each one. Do you really need to describe every single person you encounter in such detail? You're writing a novel, for goodness sake! What a mess!

The beginning was alright, but the later parts were too weak. So weak I couldn't bear to watch it.

What are mercenaries? Mercenaries are those who do things for money! What kind of writing is this? It's all about making money while losing money in battles. It's a complete rip-off. I hope you won't accuse me of lacking patriotism for saying this? Your constant padding only annoys more readers; it serves no other purpose. And what's most annoying is all that crying and wailing—I'm speechless!

Most of the authors on Qimao are people who couldn't make it on other platforms.

The beginning was alright, but it started padding the word count in the middle. The whole thing was copied from historical documents, with endless, in-depth descriptions of minor characters—a bandit was described in over twenty chapters! The more I read, the angrier I got. I strongly suggest you don't read this rubbish book. Delete it immediately!

Why don't authors write time-travel novels with any cheat codes? Giving them a space is worse than not giving them one at all. You killed a lieutenant general and a major general, so wouldn't that change history? If it's still the same, then don't write time-travel novels at all.

Is there a female lead?

It's all flowery language, but nothing has changed. What's the point of writing it?

Brother, could you please update soon?

Overall, it's pretty good and aligns well with my reading preferences, but the updates are too slow.