Mecha Frenzy

There is no one who can do good work. Those who can do it will be rewarded first.

The front is very good, but why can't I understand that it is possible to write a plot like this? A fifth killer goes to play a game for a school team in a city on an asteroid with 7 billion people in a star cluster. Does it make sense to write this kind of plot? Thinking with your toes, you know that you are not reading anything and it is just pretending. But why did you write so many chapters and dozens of chapters were not finished? You just want a master's degree from Peking University to go to the kindergarten quotation competition. I feel embarrassed for the protagonist. It is not easy to come across a good novel. It is a pity that it is so broken at this point. It makes me mad.

I was convinced. The description of a fight ended with one action. At least one passerby, A, B, and C, complained. Is the author writing a book or a barrage? This is the first time I read a book and I thought it was noisy! Fights are fights. Are you writing so many barrages just to make up the word count?

The inner drama of the characters is very rich and combines each person's personality and life experience.

Bad review, it took me a long time to write about a woman and I will die. If I write about it, I will kill someone. If I don't write about it, it will be over. Damn it.

The subject matter is very good, the writing is very good and some holes are filled in. Author, please write quickly, monthly tickets will give you a lot of rewards

The setting is good, the protagonist is a little stupid, but also very cute, there are many jokes throughout the book, and there are constant laughs.

Good reviews, the switching between the positive and negative sides of several characters is great. The main plot is still very clear, but I feel like I could write some branch plots more slowly to improve the protagonist. The protagonist doesn't have many highlights or memory points except for a few basic guidelines for doing it yourself. I'm quite okay with not writing emotional scenes or skipping them with such descriptions.

Although I didn't understand it a bit, I was slightly mentally shocked.

Very novel