NBA: I Rolled a God-Tier Player Skill from the Start!

Very good-looking, exciting and passionate

I have no idea what they're writing; I'm completely baffled.

Drafts are all held before July 1st, while the 2008 Olympics started on August 8th. Are you showing off your utter lack of intelligence by holding a draft after the Olympics are over?

First, the positioning and tactics are confusing. The female character is listed as 20 years older than the male character; if the female character were replaced with Lawrence (born in 1990), it would be more accurate. Second, the entry dates for role players into the NBA are wrong. Yi Jianlian entered in 2007, while Harden entered in 2009 alongside Curry. Also, what was used to acquire Kidd?

Have you been watching basketball for more than five years? You don't even know the draft dates, and you've stretched twenty chapters out of a single practice game.

I read 14 chapters, and it was a mess, full of grammatical errors and typos. The characters are all mixed up; Ross, James, Beasley, and Wimbledon all appear in a short time, and I don't even know who the main character's opponent is anymore. The character setup is also confusing.

The plot is chaotic, riddled with typos, and it's completely incomprehensible what the author is trying to say. This is the worst I've ever seen.

Goodbye, a mess

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The plot is okay, but the various awkward sentences and typos make it uncomfortable to read.