Pirate: the Royal Prop Master Shocks the World

Good

The order of the crew getting on board was confused.

It's just random writing. The author doesn't understand every anime. Zanpakutō has no swastika, but it's just a sword that emits fire? Is the origin pistol just so powerful? Can you just look at a weakness with your eyes? And this is how high-end domineering is used in the pirate world? Even if you know how to dominate, you can't kill Lu Qi instantly? The most speechless thing is the modal particles. You can only use solemn eyes! A child?

The protagonist is somewhat sick. He refuses to eat fairy beans. What the system gives him is all garbage. He is not domineering enough. He is not strong enough and he does not train hard. I really don't know what I am writing.

What the hell are you writing? Everyone's personality has changed. Hawkeye was seriously injured in more than 20 chapters. What do you think? The rest of it is outrageous. Ninety-five percent of the whole article is nonsense.

The battle power collapses and the plot is chaotic

Hawkeye was written too weakly

First of all, let me start by saying that the subject matter is very novel. , After reading so many novels, this is the first time I have read it. As a bookworm of 9 years, this book is really good.

The idea is a good idea, but I can't describe the feeling. The combat power is sometimes high and sometimes low. Either you write someone who can be crushed all the way, or you can slowly develop from low to high. But if you write one, you will be crushed and then beaten into a dog. When I saw the City of Seven Waters and Dalu Qi, I really couldn't stand it. There are so many props on the protagonist, can't they be used together? If not, will it kill someone if I use it? Your origin pistol can be used by Usopp, why can't you give your sword to Zoro? Why can't the charm be given to Sanji? It really took my breath away. Except for the protagonist, the other characters are really useless. Although most of the fandom is to see the protagonist pretending to be cool, you can't make the protagonist and supporting characters in the original text look like shit.

Nice