Patrol Division

The author is very handsome

After reading it, I felt very emotional. The author's old problems were all exposed. The first book I was exposed to by this author was Tun Hai. Regardless of the bad ending, I still liked the writing style and the control of the characters, so I read the remaining books, finished reading Dragon Elephant, and waited for the new book to be released. I originally wanted to gain some weight before reading, but then I stopped reading. Another year has passed, and so far. Except for typos, the first 50 to 60 percent of the content is reasonable. I would say a very important problem is that the ending does not match the world view. The world view is huge, and it took several chapters to spread it out, including ancient gods, ancestral gods, outer gods, heavenly gods, and gods. However, under the huge world view, only a small part of the story is written. The remaining twelve ancestral spirits of the Tianxun Division just ran around and were willing to be transformed into outer gods. What is the role of the Tianxun Book, etc. Of course, there are some issues that can only be imagined but not explained. When I was writing the work, I felt that the world view was not big at the beginning, and the author also wanted to write around these world views. However, he did not sort out the outline later, and just added settings in order to be able to write. After deviating from it, he continued to talk about the original world view. In the end, the bigger the book, the more empty it became, making it difficult to end. The ending is abrupt, new content is constantly inserted, and the progress is extremely tight. Suddenly the Sword Ancestor awakens, the protagonist suddenly dies, then becomes an Outer God, suddenly comes back, and then adds a new setting of the Supreme Sky, and suddenly wins, almost everywhere. There are actually quite a lot of testimonials, and I don't know where to start at the moment, so I'll leave it at that. In fact, I really hope that the author can write better works. See you in the next book if I have the chance. 👋

Recommended by bookworms of ten years, the only book I have followed in the past three years

Very good

It's okay for people with a low reading experience, but for those with a high reading experience, as long as they see the beginning of a plot, they can think of the subsequent development of the plot with their buttocks. It's really boring! The pace is still slow. The first volume is over. In fact, there shouldn't be so much nonsense. The first chapter of the second volume should go directly to Jianxuan Mountain. Why do you keep delaying it? It's used to make the climax of the second volume? To be honest, I think it's not enough. I can only briefly touch on a small plot point, and then inform readers that the next plot direction is pretty much the same!

Recommended by a ten-year-old bookworm, it is another excellent book. I hope there will be more chapters. The only drawback is that there are not enough chapters.

The front is still third, and the back is written seventh. The pinyin is different. How the author wrote it can't be written with closed eyes. There are also this article full of typos. How did it pass the review? Does the platform not care?

One chapter is the content of the old book, and the other is the revised content. One chapter is called Yue Jian, and the other is called Song Qingqing.

He loves to cause trouble when he has no strength.

The writing is very messy, and some chapters are repetitive.