Urban Blood Shadow

The Machiavellian tactics are very interesting, but the main reason is that the protagonist's training has not improved, and the protagonist is injured every time he fights and is so useless, which affects a lot of ratings.

What the hell is this thing? It's so awesome that it makes a loud noise and wipes out the whole house at every turn. In fact, they were hunted from beginning to end, and not a single person was killed.

Are you writing that he goes to your parents or to those rotten mothers? . This crap doesn't even deserve a rating of 0.1

Too many wrong words and typos

Not very good