Jiangnan Beyond the Great Wall

After reading more than a thousand chapters, the protagonist and the protector of the country have the lowest strength, but the strength outside is higher than theirs. How to explain it? How can we protect our country? Therefore, this book can only be used as a work to kill time, not as a masterpiece (you can only read it)...

First, it was okay at first, barely watchable, but suddenly it became erotic, which is disgusting. The second is why are you going out with so much wine? Just a little is enough, and you are selling it hard, and your money is useless. If you want to buy cultivation resources, it's okay. The third ancestor has said that it should be kept secret. If you don't pay attention, it feels like you have to use a loudspeaker to shout to the whole world that I have wine that can improve your cultivation. Fourth, is it really appropriate for you to have so many people in your house every day? Some people almost stop coming. You are here every day. Can you keep your things secret? Good things free of charge? The fifth is that it is the most difficult for you to improve your cultivation level. Others just practice casually and get better. Do you really understand the human heart? Things to improve one's cultivation are talked about everywhere, and people are told to keep it a secret. Sixth, I don't object to you giving things to those houses in the capital, but grabbing everything. This is not appropriate. You are like a bandit, and you come every day, and you don't even give the protagonist anything useful. The old man Qihua has been cured here, and it's okay to live here, but he wants all the good things, and even eats and drinks, and takes them to his own home. There are so many more, I'm too lazy to talk about them, I can't watch them anyway.

It's really wonderfully written, keep it up

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The plot is exciting and the sentences are fluent.

I gave it a good review early. After 200 photos, I changed the author. His writings were nothing. He started to be lewd with women. I saw 209 photos and these nine almost disgusted me to death. Bad reviews.

I've read five chapters, and it's so boring. Goldfinger doesn't have time to speed up... In this fast-paced society... Maybe the later chapters are good, but I can't even read the first few chapters. It won't help if you write them as flowers later.

1. The author's writing is too poor, the logic is confusing, and the plot can be said that I can think of dozens of chapters after reading one chapter. 2. The wording is too obvious, and nouns are repeated many times in one sentence, making it read like a primary school student writing a running account. 3. The character creation is too failed. The supporting characters are basically just decorations, with no psychological activities and no description of the characters.

Anyone who was a mother wanted to have sex with him. As soon as he grew up, he found a group of ancestors who would take away the meat without spitting out the bones to raise him.

There are too many women. In a teaching force where a salary of 5,000 yuan is a high salary, an annual salary reward of 2 million yuan is too exaggerated.