Jiangnan Beyond the Great Wall

Having read over a thousand chapters, the protagonist and the nation's protectors are the weakest, while those outside are actually stronger. How do you explain this? How can they protect their homeland? Therefore, this book can only be considered a pastime, not a masterpiece (just for reading...).

First, the beginning was alright, barely watchable, but then it suddenly became overly sentimental, which was disgusting. Second, why are you selling so much wine? A little is enough, but you're pushing it so hard. Your money is useless. If you could buy cultivation resources, that would be fine. Third, the ancestor already said to keep it a secret, but you didn't pay attention.

This is brilliantly written, I'll keep reading!

That's enough.

The plot is engaging, and the sentences flow smoothly.

I gave a good review too early. After 200 pages, they changed authors, and the writing became utterly terrible, filled with lewd content involving women. By page 209, those nine pages almost made me sick. Bad review.

I've read five chapters, and it's so tedious. The plot twists haven't even accelerated yet... This fast-paced society... Maybe the later chapters will be better, but if I can't even finish the first few, writing a lot more later won't help.

1. The author's writing is terrible, the logic is chaotic, and the plot is so bad that I can predict dozens of chapters after reading just one. 2. The padding is too obvious, with nouns appearing repeatedly in a single sentence, making it read like a primary school student writing a diary. 3. The character development is a complete failure. The supporting characters are basically just decorations, with no inner thoughts or any description of their role as characters.

He wanted to sleep with any female, and after growing up alone and struggling, he found a bunch of gluttonous women to raise as soon as he had a little ability.

There are too many women in the teaching profession, where a salary of 5,000 yuan is considered high. An annual bonus of 2 million yuan is outrageous.