The Land Sword Immortal: Eighty Years Guarding the Sword Pavilion

The sentences are fluent and the content is substantial. There is no nagging discomfort with killing, nor is there any harem where everyone falls in love with each other. The protagonist is not a frivolous person. Although he is not a righteous and passionate person, he is also quite principled. He may be a little tactful at times, but he is definitely not sensationalistic or deliberate. Laughing characters, immortal cultivation novels, the protagonist is usually very crazy, but he is like a sharp sword hidden in a sword box, low-key but not aggrieved, not sadistic, there are no bloody plots such as inner demons, and the slow development of the plot is in line with the title of the Shushan Sword Sect, but it does not feel boring, especially the training system, the sword Qi, Sword, Intent, Sword Power, Sword Soul, Sword Heart, Sword Soul, and those realms are very sound and well-founded. There is no such passing and empty feeling as practicing on a train. It is as if the reader is practicing with the protagonist. The author and the spiritual pet do not deliberately play tricks. It is a very serious novel and there is nothing extreme about it. Breaking through limits, young people going crazy, no love between men and women, experiences of inner demons, just an experience of a time traveler carrying a reasonable system that defies nature but does not destroy the laws of the world, and finds the value of his life in a different world. Ordinary but not mediocre, it can be said to stand out among a bunch of boring and refreshing articles, and it is truly a masterpiece!

I have read so many time-traveling novels about cultivating immortals, and many of them feature loser protagonists who are burdened with blood feuds, and all kinds of bloody plots. To be honest, I am really tired of reading them, but this one does not have such bloody plots. It is not bad, at least the overall plot looks good. It's okay. Although the protagonist is handsome, he is not as talented as Lin Jinghong. The protagonist's personality is stable and progressive, but due to lack of experience, he seems to be immature. I hope that the protagonist can develop a "big heart" in the demon world that dares to venture, fight, and is stable at the same time. This book also has minor problems, such as a lot of typos, and some plot problems. For example, it is clearly stated that the protagonist is one step away from the sword realm, but later it is said that he has just reached the early stage of Sword God. This is a bit wrong. Although it may be that the author considered that the protagonist's sword breakthrough was too fast, which would affect the subsequent division of strength, so he changed it slightly, but this is indeed a minor fault. I hope the author can be more rigorous later. I am optimistic about this novel and hope the author can bring better plot content to readers.

This is the first time I've read a novel and given it a negative review! I won't talk about you in the whole article. Look at what you wrote. Every time you do something, you explain and emphasize it repeatedly. If the thing you just introduced appears here, you have to introduce it again😸Are you a repeater? It sucks to death! The plot of the main character is also disgusting. There are problems with the three views of the whole person. Someone mentioned in the comments about the three views that the author has not even graduated from elementary school.

Although it doesn't have the plot of a large-scale traditional cliché novel, it is fortunately bland with a bit of relaxation, making it suitable for quick reading.

I have seen more than 600 chapters. The first chapters were quite exciting, but the last few chapters are too weak. Is it an illusion? It's been a long time since I've seen a good fantasy book. The plot of this book makes people read it, rather than blindly pretending. It can be seen that the author's organization and level are still very clear. He often reviews previous details in the writing, which makes the world view more complete. I hope there will be more in-depth development on the main line. This "copy" of Demon World is really a bit boring.

I understand the truth. I didn't think this novel would be very good, and it was just for passing the time. But really, this novel can't even do the simplest thing of passing the time. I can't read the later chapters at all. The author's three views follow his own IQ level, and they are all extremely low. Double standards, Holy Mother, talk nonsense, speak harshly, and don't show humility even when you know you are wrong. Really, the first few chapters don't even look like they were written by the same person compared to the later ones. Summary: It is not recommended for people with normal three-dimensional outlook to read, as they will be severely crushed by the author's writing skills and three-dimensional moral aspects.

To have such a high rating, is it because you hired a navy or paid the platform? Objectively speaking: There are many typos (there can be ten typos in one chapter!) There are many bad sentences (missing words, missing words, and cannot be connected into a sentence) A lot of nonsense (I can write a sentence seven or eight times, don't you feel annoyed?) Character names are scrawled: Yang Fei on the previous page, Wang Fei on the next page, the heroine Xuerou can become Xiaoxue Funny logic: Mrs. Liu has gone from being an ordinary girl to being very good-looking. The character design is crappy: The protagonist's character design is crappy, and he scolds the heroine for his own fault, and he's so shameless even though he's so shameless. No matter how stupid I am, I can't stand it. This 13-year-old author has no intention of writing this novel properly. I feel sick when I read it. He doesn't have much writing skills and still writes so poorly. The story is good, but the author makes me sick.

The beginning is engaging and the reader has anticipation and suspense. The pace of the story is tight. Contemporary people's life is fast-paced, and the storyline does not drag on. The characters are unique and distinct. There is drama, conflict, and tension in the relationships between the characters. The stories and events are very down to earth. People who watch it will doubt its authenticity, and things are logical and rigorous. The plot has changes, ups and downs, and surprises. This is not the kind of book that you can read from beginning to end. The amount of information is also large enough, which is an important criterion for whether it looks good. A Hollywood movie might be incomprehensible if you lose a few scenes. I hope the author's final story will have a crisis and climax. It is exciting, touching, shocking and shocking. The theme must have a certain positive meaning. Anyway, you won't be disappointed, come on! ! Wishing you a great success🔥Please pay attention, I am a loyal reader of this book - Big Legs

Well, I was quite excited when I first started watching it. Even though I kept drinking fake wine, the more I watched, the more uncomfortable I became. I have a problem with my outlook on life. I can't say what's wrong with it, but there must be something wrong. Maybe I can't accept this kind of pure egoism.

The subject matter of this book is very interesting. I want to read it after reading the first chapter, but it becomes more and more difficult to stick to it. The writing is poor, like a primary school student's diary. There are many typos. Didn't you check it before posting? The plot is bland, with no ups and downs at all. The most annoying thing is the three-dimensional problem reflected in the whole article. It is difficult to imagine what kind of three-dimensional author the author has to write such a protagonist. He has no emotional intelligence, stingy, does not know how to be grateful, etc. How on earth can so many shortcomings be gathered into one person? I originally thought that the plot behind so many comments in the comment section might be restrained, but the result is that people are becoming more and more speechless.